Very nice!

Aww poor Tomoko chan.
Great fic

Heheheheh that was epic, poor Tomoko can't catch a break.

I'm seriously considering to put her in one of my Puella Magi fanfics, she has so much trolling potential!

Really good story here, I loved the way all the characters interacted. I haven't read about Komiyama but seems like a nice fellow. Given that I've only seen the anime I still mostly ship TomokoxYuu but this is interesting.

Good job with the one shot!