I loved the cuddling part wasn't really clear they got engaged before telling granny but still an awesome story

Make it much longer! Much much longer! Like a million chapters! Make it go all the way through the wedding, maybe the brothers wedding as well, and past that to when they have kids and stuff! So much potential it's practically gushing out of this story!

Very sweet story. I liked the amount of detail, chronicling Ed's long travels just to get home, his befriending the boy alchemist, etc. In a way, life after all the craziness of The Promised Day and what the boys went through, gained, and lost, feels very melancholy. They accomplished the miraculous, yet living on afterwards had to have felt surreal. You did a nice job of portraying how Ed may have reacted to that. (Me personally, I found it sad and unnatural for the boys to travel apart from each other, and it seemed Ed got the short end of the stick, losing his alchemy the way he did. Not very fair or equivalent, considering all he did, all he sacrificed.). The way you showed Ed and Winry's blossoming relationship was very cute, and tastefully done, so thanks for that! Poor Ed, granny Pinako is gonna leave poor Ed traumatized, or at least with a permanent blush covering his face!

Nice present! And Ed's bumbling to Granny was hilarious!

Sweet feels! Great job!

Love it! It was soooooooooo beautiful! *-*

That was great! Your writing is flawless!