Honestly, I don't think I can read this anymore beyond this point. Why would he invite someone to a wedding that he himself was only invited to because he was a date? How does that make any sense? AND he should have his "pureblood" manners to at least remind him that wasn't an okay thing to do? It isn't his wedding or his friends' wedding or even his acquaintance's wedding. This is a good fic and the idea behind it is wonderful, but I can't get past the obvious disregard to the characters, the actual books themselves, and, at the very least, the basic principles that each character was raised/built on. In the last chapter, Hermione looked like she was inches from cheating before she and Draco were even remotely official. That is extremely ooc. Even Draco is extremely ooc. PLEASE GIVE AN OOC WARNING IN YOUR DESCRIPTION.

I'm kind of disappointed that Draco so easily flirted and was attracted to the store clerk. Maybe it connects later in the story, but as far as personality goes, it doesn't really fit with how the author had set his personality up from the beginning. In the beginning, he seemed kind of closed off and then opened up to Hermione. Idk, it makes him seem kind of.. cheap? Easy?

I loved this story! Thank you for writing it!

I Love you, thank you so so much for writing this

I beinged reading this all night! Loved this entire story and I'm so glad Draco was able to kill his father. I wish we could see of Narcissa or Rom came around but outside of that it was all perfect. Thanks for a wonderful story.

First of all thank you...I was getting worried about finding another amazing story on here and you've come to the rescue! This plot is really interesting so far and I'm looking forward to reading more.

And your main characters are not themselves at all...or even close to character. Done reading your silly stuff. Rubbish

And Cho was already graduated before Deathly Hollows timeline so...why is she there as a student? You should either actually read HP (not just use movies as baseline since this is the section for BOOKS). Then you’d know more about the secondary characters.

Blond and blonde are “gendered” words. Blond for males, blonde for females.

Actually, Neville was in his 7th year so he’s repeating but Luna was a 6th year during the war and would be returning to either redo 6th year or start 7th year for the first time.

It’s so sweet. I liked your ending a lot actually. I that he should have died too. I know many would have kept him a live but then there would have always been that fear that he would escape and ruin their happiness. Good work.

Nargles remind me of...
Narwhals, Narwhals
Swimming in the ocean
Causing a commotion
Coz they are so awesome

Narwhals, Narwhals
Swimming in the ocean
Pretty big and pretty white
They beat a polar bear in a fight

Like an underwater unicorn
They've got a kick-ass facial horn
They're the Jedi of the sea
They stop Cthulu eating ye

Narwhals
They are Narwhals
Narwhals
Just don't let 'em touch your balls
Narwhals
They are Narwhals
Narwhals
Inventors of the Shish Kebab

Narwhals
They are Narwhals
Narwhals
Just don't let 'em touch your balls
Narwhals
They are Narwhals
Narwhals

Ok but it was Hermione's fault. Instead of keeping Draco a secret and treating it like a game, she should've warned her friends. She knew he was going to be facing a lot of shitty comments. And although being drunk isn't an excuse to be rude, his one comment wasn't worth him getting jumped or Hermione crying out in the snow like a child. She can't seem to take responsibility for her actions.

Hermione shouldn't have invited Draco to the wedding if she was going to act like this the entire time. She's being a brat and it's almost like she's looking for reasons to fight.

OMG that is amazing! I loved the story and the character development throughout was amazing. Such a great read!