I LOVE THIS! GREAT JOB!

I love this story

Yep, children

I loved the story, and I love Damian and Billy's friendship.

Please keep writing. Your story was brilliant and there are only a few good Billy stories. Pleeeease keep it up.

Awesome! I love it

Can you please make a sequel with these two. More 'hanging out' time for them as civilians, please. Keep it up.

Great story. It was awesome.

This was a really good read. Not gonna lie startled the crap outta me with it's length but a good story. I had thought Billy would still be ten years old with Damian around but your DC cannon does make sense. The transition from childish bickering to best friends was so natural and smooth it was very believable. A great read especially since Damian didn't really have relationships with other kid heroes around his age. Not a lot to complain about aside minor things. Like I doubt it would really take that long for those two boys to be found, especially with Batman on the case, and since neither boys officially hit puberty I doubt their bodies would change so drastically. Whoa I sound like a jerk being so nitpicky but ya gotta take the good with the still-good-but-could-be-better.

wow! that was really really good!
keep up the good work!

thumbs up, great story!

This is wonderful, a very fun read! I ADORE the idea of Damian and Billy pair up; in fact it's a bit of my head canon that Billy should join the Bat family (Hello, black-hair blue-eyed orphan boy, why hasn't Bruce adopted him yet? lol), so I really liked the dynamics in this story, I just loved it so much! Good work and hope to see more form you.

I really loved this it was awesome