This is so interesting.

Please please continueee

wahyu apa yang membuat anda akan merilis chapter baru huh? please,please,please update?! :') fic nya beneran keren kaka

three words: please continue it. I cant imagine what happens next, so please continue it... your writing is really great, I hope I can have that ability.
I'll be waiting :)

its very nice work, I feel like read the real novel when I read it :)

This is very awesome! I learn to read in english and I read this story and I really like it!

Can you please update this? Please? I need to now what happens next!

Very eloquently written, 8/10 :)

I get the shivers when Light used the name 'Lawliet' to refer to L, as only a selected few knew about it, including Watari whom is no longer alive. I'd love to read more about Light's attempt to sway L into siding with him.

p.s: Don't hate your writing. I know what you feel when you compare your fic to some of the more popular ones in the DN fandom. However, writing a fic relating to the canon of DN takes a lot of effort as well, and believe me, your fic is easy on the eyes, so don't give up. ")

Really enjoying this story. I've added it to my community Death Note Afterlife too. L is adorable but I'm glad you've kept his intelligence. Your writing's really good you shouldn't keep putting yourself down.

Finally a new chapter! I was so happy to read it :)
It seems L's getting more and more tense around Light. The way he reacts is just adorable. Also, I like that you describe feelings and other small details, it adds to the story.
L still can't remember his name, huh... I have a feeling that someday someone will accidentally mention it, and he'll understand that the name belongs to him. But it makes me wonder, if Misa even will be able to see L's real name, the death note takes its effect on him, since he just cheated death once.
Also - you say Light is probably 17 years old, but shouldn't he be 18 soon turning 19? My point is he found the death note when he was 17, and by the time L confined him, Light should've already turned 18. So, if L died in October/November, Light should've had about four months before his nineteenth birthday.

I like it!
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Bangles that's big! 0.0u
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More please?!

i really like the plot. i think it's very interesting. keep up the good work. please continue it. this is a new type of amnesia-plot story. i bet it's good.

I found this fanfic a few minutes ago, and I have to admit, I am hooked.

i have a feeling this story is going to be interesting :D

oh, I already like this! I have a feeling this is gonna be interesting, though I'm almost certain that this story will have a sad ending. Please, keep writing, you're doing really good job and I appreciate that you do put effort into your writing and try and form sentences correctly, since this has become quite a rare thing among ff writers... my applause to you. I really wish I could help you with beta-ing, but unfortunately I share the same trouble as you, not being a native speaker myself.