This chapter is a little dark, but life with the Carrows at Hogwarts would be dark. So few stories go into life at Hogwarts that year, I hope someone does write the story to go with this chapter.

This chapter doesn't work for me. When a character is changed so drastically they are no longer the character.

I think chapter one is a good one-shot AU story. I don't know where the story would/could go from here, but it is good on its own. I like your style of writing.

i think this would make a neat story i like the idea that you are using the regeneration aspect of Doctor Who. if you do decide that you will continue this i will have to keep eye out for it.

So...being the Master Of Death gives him the ability to Regenerate?