Reviews for Intrinsic Fascination
Lupe0 chapter 26 . 7/22
This story definitely took me on a wild ride. One with laughs, sadness, and hopefulness. Overall great story, thank you for sharing :)
denyana chapter 26 . 6/4
Very nice story, I enjoyed reading it. I thought in the end Rosalie should have done more to gain Bella forgiveness for all the crap she pulled at the beginning, And the plot with Rose and Emmet running didn't make sense to me - were they going to run from Victoria forever and why were they separating from their family because of one vampire. But the story was easy to read, I liked both the Cullens and the wolves and I liked that they got along unlike almost all the other stories out there so thank for sharing it with us.
Lemonmelons chapter 26 . 5/20
Thanks for the update!

I think I found an important typo: "Bella, I haven't had a chaotic week since the day I met you. But then yes, every week has been chaotic since."
Guest chapter 26 . 5/9
Thanks for the read.
averiarose chapter 26 . 5/8
Thanks so much for finishing this story! I’m pretty biased but I enjoy mostly femslash pairings, so if you’re interested in those, let me know! I hope you continue writing for Twilight because there are unfortunately not many femslash writers left in the fandom. Anyway, thanks for everything! Stay safe and healthy!
JenDamn chapter 26 . 5/6
Yeah, if only the bad guys died, it wouldn't feel realistic. That's certainly a unique take on Rosalie's power, and a fun transition point into fun Bella/Rosalie time. Wow! Can't believe you finally finished! I'm a little sad now :o(. Congratulations though, I hate when stories are left incomplete.
Jay aka Jordan chapter 26 . 5/6
Loved this ride
elliehandesu chapter 25 . 4/20
Yey i can felt your long sigh that finally Lauren died, oh boyyy its still on climax for this part then na smut part between the pair i cant wait for that too
JenDamn chapter 25 . 4/20
"I'm a surprisingly messy person," awesome! Interesting development in Carlisle's and Esme's powers, and Rosalie's response was understandable. Did I miss Rosalie having a power? A lot was going on. And now, in the words of the characters from BTVS, "Where do we go from here? The battle's done and they kind of won. . ." etc., (Also it seems like Irena is always slated to die, poor chick).
Jay aka Jordan chapter 25 . 4/20
A snorting Rosalie lol
Lemonmelons chapter 25 . 4/20
Its interesting how your vampires differ from SMs: Rosalie has a warm body, Rosalie&bella even sleep, they need to breath, they break and heal bones, they bleed, Henri can't dig himself out...
Is there anything else I've overlooked?
elliehandesu chapter 24 . 4/7
Heck I cant tell anymore and i want more of it lol.. Holy moly i wish laurent seriously dead..
JenDamn chapter 24 . 4/7
I super agree with you breaking the battle into two parts (at least that's what it seems like). There is a lot going on. Like what specifically is going on with the wolves? I mean, I obviously get that they are the reason Bella and her people weren't slaughtered but I don't understand the why yet. And then with Benjamin, his playful behavior seems to suit his personality, still, I'd like to understand his motivation. Sometimes I forget that a lot of Laurent's vampires may be doing this against their will. Yeah, I didn't think Ben and Tia would have been on that side, but only cuz of my previous statement. Thanks for updating!
LovesMe419 chapter 24 . 4/7
You did good. I just got confused with all the characters and who was actually fighting who
Packer82 chapter 24 . 4/7
Love it! Thx for another amazing chapter! Thx for sharing your talent and all your hard work in sharing your story! Hope more comes soon!
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