well written sharp dialogue

Intriguing story idea. Not sure if you still mean to continue this fanfic, but I love the idea of there being two trinities to defeat the Devil. I always have adored the original trio, and was kinda disappointed that the show series ended without allowing a glimpse of their fates in the afterlife. I'm also not satisfied with the inception ending where Tom, Hal and Alex intend to break out of the dream reality and fight the Devil again, but the series just finished right there.

More more more please!

This is such a good idea! (And well-written too!) I hope you'll continue it.

great chapter, well thought out. I hope they do find a way to rescue Mitchell!

I really liked this idea, I would love to read more

I like the twist that, while he was allowed to greet George and Annie when they came, he wasn't allowed to stay with them like in other stories. That's all I can really say for how short the entry is, but I hope you feel like continuing the story.