The Damned stand ready.
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I honestly liked your approach. It was always easy taking the path where acolite is just someone to summon buildings while Louise relives the canon. You went for amazing deviation from it and made it truly seem like the real scourge. The only fault I found was the a bit tok fast turning of luis morals. Would enjoy slow corruption more. All in all 8.5/10

This is so unexpectedly awesome

...too little, too late.

I mean... did we expect the spoiled brat to last any longer? Honestly?

That was an amazing story, one that I didn't expect the get as invested in as much as I did. You blended humor and tragedy in a way that I never could. Heck, I almost teared up during the end chapters; so bravo to you my friend!
May the Scourge continue their glorious march upon the world, and may Louise hopefully see it all to pass. Huzzah!

this had to have been the best damn FoZ story I have ever read.

Intriguing, well, Louise is resolved to enjoy what she has so far.

XD Oh Siesta, Louis is dead...to romance, and sex, they all are dead a matter of fact.

Oh lord, this is funny, and great at the same time, love it!

Well, this was certainly a ride. If you do actually make a sequel do you mind adding a chapter here to let us know? I really like this universe.

"Because the truest victory... was stirring the heart of the people"... Damn. Just... Wow. This was a fun ride, thank you.

Oh. She’s not loyal? That’s unfortunate... wonder what she’s planning. ;)

I wonder if we’ll see how her old teachers are enjoying their new unlife. ;) Love the chapter! XD

I’m sure she’ll get her eventually. ;) Love the chapter! XD

It’s cute that they still have faith. ;) Love the chapter! XD