DarkSiren49 shut the fuck up and enjoy the story buzzkill

Hope you add everything soon I have an AO3 account 2!

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DarkSiren49
-Critics United

Till next time you pervs! I SEE HOW IT IS!

*blinking my eyes
Ehhhh?! Nande?! Just that?
Uhm...promise me you will write more please? Love u! :)

I want to see Rin go on a bloodlust rampage right in front of Yukio! THAT will put a bit of complication into their relationship!

Or, better yet, he decides that the taste of blood isn't enough and he needs to eat flesh, too.

And then...in his craze...he could rape Yukio?

Yup, then it'd be interesting to see how Yukio would react afterward. Rin would probably feel so bad that'd he'd run away which would cause Yukio to forgive him and start looking for him.

Ahhhhh, but those are just predictions for your story XD, I feel like there's going to be a bloodbath in some form next chapter and I CAN'T WAIT!

I just.. Gosh seme Rin is HOT! (*q * )
Its so rare to find Yukio as bottom and I want to thank you for writing this! Please continue

I couldn't get enough! Please give us some more. Your story is so great!

Great short chapter, can't wait to see the next one

Hey now, plots cooking, XP, anyways your story is coming along nicely, but one thing you should remember, how the old man affects ring, I mean you kinda downplayed his effect on rin, and that promise he made to himself, you know he can't go around and start hurting everyone if he wants to become paladin so he needs to find that medium and find it fast

Naw, it was pretty good, that was a good sex scene for a first time yaoi writer, I've seen others that aware better and also others that are worst, you did pretty good for your first time don't worry

Hope you will write again. :'(

no offence, but well...you see you're the one saying some people will hate you and others will love...from what i see, the people who ask for bonrin not being a good supporter to you while the other who ask for yukiorin keeping up with your story. If you're clinging to your viewers to continue your story the you need to give what most of them want. What im trying to say is, if you really love bonrin pair then continue to write this. It's yours but if you're writing this from your viewer influence than i can understand why u stopped writing due to harsh review.
Point is, if this continue to happen i advice you to follow what they want. It's better. What i see is the yukiorin pair shipper is far worth because they come to your story first after update than bonrin. There you can see who really want to read your story. Or you can take second choices, be thickheaded and continue this by ignoring all those reviews. It's really sad when new author loose hope when their first story was ruined by some followers. Hope you will take my advice positively.

I've been in ff . net long. Since 2009 but i never wrote in english cuz my english sucks but thats how im dealing with my viewers. :)

Hope i can see u writing back soon. Have a good day!

I too, see what you mean. Smut will be reported? Dude, seriously. The story is rated M and that's the highest it can go and there are hundreds of smut that are more detailed than this and you choose to complain about this one? Moron.
I think the story is good :)

YAY. loved it, thank you *gives cookie* XD

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