| Reviews for Kept In Check |
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Sandy100 chapter 3 . 1/10/2016 Shes pretty lucky to have those swords! |
Sandy100 chapter 2 . 1/10/2016 Slender is from Germany eh nice :) I really like this story so far, hope it wont be too gruesome despite the horror label lol |
Sandy100 chapter 1 . 1/10/2016 Oh boy.. she's gonna meet slendy.. i hope he doesn't fuck her up |
InSaNiTy-118n chapter 7 . 12/21/2015 This is so cool! I know u probably won't see this, but man, u really have talent! Wish i could do back-flip kicks... lolz, jk. BYES! |
SpideyVenomCarny chapter 22 . 6/18/2015 Pls make a sequel where theyre happy together and in love but show the sequence of it happening |
Dark-Automaton chapter 22 . 7/31/2014 Nice story. The character of Sierra is genuinely tragic, and although the ending is bittersweet, it was believable. |
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 22 . 6/27/2014 Omg best story everrrr! I loved every part of it! Thank you for writing this fabulous story! *Hugs and gives you pet rock* :DDD! |
MyNameIsNutella chapter 1 . 6/10/2014 ... *checks for tears* Yeah, uh I definitely did not cry at all, heh... No way! I uh.. *hides buckets of tears* Ahem. Anyways, thanks for having the endurance for finishing such an awesome story... Holy crap was that good. And secondly, that ending doe. And I am kinda at lost of words for what to say, other than finally logging into my account... Maybe I will write my own story now... GIVE ME YOUR ENDURANCE! At least I won't be impaled by a tree anymore... Ahh nostalgia. So beautiful.. I guess all I have to say is, this has been quite the ride. Goodbye Slender.. Goodbye Ella... Goodbye amazing character cast... This definitely was a unique one. Let me tell ya. So thanks for all that juicy stuffs LadyMonoceros... You done good. You done well... It should have been well in the other sentence but whatever. See ya! |
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 21 . 6/2/2014 This chapter.. was fantastic! And Sierra's point of view was flawless(to me) Please update soon! Sorry for not checking on updates for months. |
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 20 . 6/2/2014 *Rolls around on bed while simultaneously saying 'yay' in a monotone voice* |
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 18 . 6/2/2014 My freaking gawd, havent checked updates in months, so I passed english-barely- and will continue into 9th grade! Horray for passing Now, I must read all the chapters you have made! :3 |
Nutella chapter 21 . 4/30/2014 I need to get my ff account password so I can actually use it. Darn. But after this chapter, I do have one thing to say... I REFUSE TO BELIVE THAT ELLA IS DEAD IMGISH I WILL RIP HER SOULD BACK FROM THE PITS OF DARKNESS! Ahem, anyways... I really liked this chapter. Must have taken a huge amount of time to write as well as the huge amount of time to read but, it's good that way. And also, hoodie wanted that "ass-pounding" to happen. The nerve of him. As always thank you for continuing the story and making it grow. I always love each chapter and can't wait till the next one comes out! So yeah. Love ya bubbles, and seezzzz you l8tr. #yuuusssstarbuckkkkssscofffeeee. Idk man, idk. Maybe it's all this Impalin' on trees that's getting to my head. Or maybe I have a Sierra. Who knows. Certainly not American Airlines because maybe if they were flying the plane right instead of crashing into an ocean, people wouldn't have to die. But then again maybe life had other plans. OHHHHHH CLIFFHANGERRRRERERERED! |
Akemi2013 chapter 20 . 4/28/2014 Loved the symbolism in the dreams, and I do not mind mushiness at alllll! Very nice darling, I await the next one! |
Nutella chapter 20 . 4/13/2014 I don't feel like signing in right now so I am just going to review like this! Yay. Just one thing I have to say, AMAZING. That was just, really well thought out in my opinion. The romance was well balanced and not over the top. Seriously, even if more and more romance is introduced into the story I wouldn't care. It's just really awesome. Especially when the characters arn't one dimensional like every other ff story I have read. See, what makes "mushy" moments like this so amazing, is that the characters had gone through stuff together, or in this case fighting together. I mean, as long as the characters have actual HISTORY with each other. That's what makes it fun to read and imagine. And that my friend, is exactly why this romance is very nice. Very nice indeed. So, congratulations on accomplishing something most people cant do in their stories. Yay. And also, I hope your cold goes away. I have a cold too. We are cold buddies. As always, great story! And I hope to see more of this masterpiece in the future. For now I must go make pic art. HURAH! |
SakuraRain16 chapter 19 . 4/5/2014 I had read the story up to this point and had resisted to review this until now. I LOVE Ella's character design and what she is becoming at the moment. Her connections with Hoody is hilarious and I feel a little bit of Jayden in me but wow . . . continue writing. I wonder where Ella and Slender's relationship (If you want to call it. :P) will go. I want to see Ella back in action and how she will work with Sierra. Can't wait to read more! |