I loved this story. Very interesting. I liked that it explored the 'monster' in Shizuo, 'cause he can't always deny its existence. :)

That was a very good read! I really like the characterization of Izaya and Shizuo. Shizuo's thought processes were interesting to read through, and the smut was amazing. I loved the end when Shizuo realized Izaya had only been acting and pretty much giving himself a birthday present. So devious but yet so Izaya-like! I also really liked how their hate relationship remained until the end.

Just letting you know that Izaya wears a black shirt rather than a white one, he calls Shizuo 'Shizu-chan' rather than 'Shizuo-chan', and Shizuo's eyes are brown rather than blue. Also there's the part where Shizuo is looking for Izaya and picking up his random articles of clothes where a sentence says, "His breaths came in hard little pants that had nothing to do with his minimal physical excretions". I had a good laugh when the scene was supposed to be serious, but I think you meant to write "excursions" (excretion means to eliminate bodily waste).

Overall, I really enjoyed the story, and I hope to see more from you!

The real question here is did shizuo get the coffee?

I just wanted you to know that shizuo has brown eyes and izaya has a black under shirt

Amazing writing! :3 Following you in hopes that you write more for any of the fandoms I like!

i love it soooo much u should write more its AWESOME

very fun to read, make part two...
no, don't, it can't get any better than this.
no, i must read a seconed part.
no, wait, do whatever you like,
i love you. i really do.
u got talent, amazing story.

Wow! Quite well-written and (of course) very sexy. Your descriptions are tangible, delightful, and delicious. The plot stayed very true to the characters and was not at all contrived. I truly enjoyed this fanfic! Nice work!