I am confused. I think I got most of the who's who, but you need to do this story from the other side (Hermione maybe) and clear up the mess your one shot made.

Interesting story hope to see more from you soon.

Cute, a little bit off for me, as I have no reference to the Anime this involved!

To much out of context. If all those OC (?) characters are from other Fandooms you should mention so in the summary. Without any explenation this Fic makes no sense ...