Reviews for Price Check
WishingFox chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
I can't believe it took me so long to discover this gem!
nocloudypooh chapter 1 . 6/10/2016
This is so cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
This was so freaking cute. Thank you for posting this, loved it 3
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
That was so adorable! And the end was hilarious, I was dying! Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
Oh my god that ending! And flint. Oh flint you are amazing
Rehza chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Oh my god, this was absolutely adorable! I can't get enough of these two
Seren chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Dwah it was so Fluffly
pyr0technic chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I. LOVE. THIS!
Platinum Daylight chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
AHHH.

This is so cute. omgomg I like how your second fic is followed up by this one.

AHHH.

I also love how you have covers for your stories, I don't see many of those. It's just really useful and I love that feature on .

Keep this up 3
CactuarAssassin chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This is adorable! I also love how its in second person. I can't write it, so I admire people who can :]
ILikeShorts chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I don't usually go for AUs, but I really enjoyed this. :) I found myself rooting for them to get together the whole way through, and I think you did a great job setting up a realistic progression from total strangers to finally asking each other out. Plus, any and all fangirling over Volkner is always good with me! :D

It did kind of come off less like Dawn's POV and more like one of those stories where the reader's supposed to put herself in the shoes of the main character, but I felt like it totally worked either way, so that's more of an observation than a criticism.

Oh, and I loved the ending, when they were both apparently so psyched about their date that she forgot the receipt and he forgot the bag. Too cute. XD
Bkshp95 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
That was a pretty cute story but from who's point of view was it from cos that was the only confusing thing.
Edicedia chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Adorable! Great oneshot! Can't wait to read more from you! :3
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
well-written one-shot, though there admittedly wasn't much tying it to pokemon besides the characters' names and personalities.