I dont get why thetes a lot of weird things going between women in this story but you need to keep your sexuality away from these innocent characters

Yes, yes, yes! It's getting interesting! Romance! Drama! Deviation from canon!

I was worried for the first few chapters that you were just going to follow the same old storyline despite the changes you made. A few too many long passages straight from canon. I guess your skillz have improved since then?

So you just out right shatter the safe of six paths why I thought that the guy can’t even interact with the living world only if the juubi or some conditions meet other than that he’s only a spirit that can’t do anything but talk the do little else without aid, he’s just a soul I get your introducing a new villain but salt on wound for the dead sage don’t dis him like that

The gods and spirits of old

Well, I am was certainly surprised and delighted with the twists and turns and just utter surprises this fanfiction has brung. I have so many questions about the lore (more specifically the Uzumaki and their contributions). My heat goes out to Kushina, it was an accurate description someone lodged a Kunai in her heart, and I think it never stopped bleeding. I very much enjoyed this fic, and was Sasuke hasn’t defected (at least not yet) and that Itachi realized how skewered his reasoning was for traumatizing his little brother into killing him. Breathtaking fic mate. It felt the fic’s emotions were my emotions, it reacted in kind to what I felt at certain moments. EPPPPPICCCC! *plus ultra thumbs up* ()~

I’m so disappointed in myself I read shoton as shotacon WTF!? IS WRONG WITH ME

yOumixed kankuro with kabuto...

This was a great chapter a well-done fight between Naruto and Rock Lee and the sunset of youth had me laughing so much I was crying.

Your explanation for how Naruto’s Shoton works was wrong. You said he can crystallise anything with mass and that it doesn’t work on energy. This doesn’t make sense as energy has mass as demonstrated by the equation E mc2. Energy is equal to mass multiplied by the constant squared( in most cases the constant being the speed of light, 3 x 10 to the power 8 metres per second).

Hahahaha chains! I thought of using that but I usually try to avoid certain kinks. Brilliant hahahaha

The term brick sh** house. Are you an Aussie? I’ve never heard it from anybody else is all

Please resume this story

This is such a great story I love how you have written all the characters and that you have made naruto smarter in a realistic way I also cannot wait to see the way you are going to take this story

Oh man, I broke down laughing as I read this chapter! This was one of the best joke's that I've ever read!

I remember that only a few chapters ago, I think it was chapter 27, you've stated that you wish to 'build-upon' the Naruto world.

And now five chapters later we have Super-Girl! I bet in another ten or so chapters you will have Gilgamesh and Artoria duke it out with their noble phantasms.

Great World Building, I have to admit! The Naruto world is suddenly so very deep and oh so complex that I can hardly keep up!

Will you please update some time soon I really want to read what happens next