| Reviews for How it Could Have Been |
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excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 2/19/2016 A diary…ok, this has great potential here. It can tell the truth, or a pack of lies, or everything in between and then some. |
Ghargr18 chapter 7 . 1/11/2015 Are you going to continue this? It's really good, but last uPdated 2 years ago! |
angelazzarello94 chapter 7 . 5/11/2014 Can u please update |
Kaya70 chapter 7 . 11/18/2013 Live it cannot wait for next chapter |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/16/2013 You would not have Rachel, or Isabella, or Ryan. I thought Isabella had a little sister. |
excessivelyperky chapter 6 . 8/31/2013 Petunia should have cut and run years ago, but at least Vernon decided to leave. I'm glad she has a family to look after her. |
excessivelyperky chapter 5 . 8/31/2013 Petunia needs to pack and run-Marge sounds like the type to wallop her, too. It's nice to see all the progress the family is making, though. |
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 8/31/2013 Good chapter-both Lucas and Isabella sound adorable. And Petunia is in trouble. I don't know how many phones had answering machines back in the 1980's, though-it was in the 1990's when we first got ours. But I'm sure that the Dursleys would have everything that was up to date that way. |
excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 8/31/2013 So, what did Tom leave in the box? And why did he allowed himself to be Kissed? Although since he already had a Horcrux by the time he was sixteen, perhaps being Kissed isn't as big a deal for him as it might be for others. And there is something really wrong with Petunia-you have to wonder if Vernon whaps her around at home. |
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 8/31/2013 Ah! A nice change from canon. And I can see James wondering if marrying Lily really was the right thing-you have to wonder if he really loved her, or only wanted to spite Snivvy, and win over someone who resisted him for so long. |
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 8/31/2013 Well, this is a side of Dumbledore we only glimpsed in canon; but he did believe strongly in the Greater Good. Besides, Snape looked a bit like Tom and was a poor halfblood; Dippet might have indulged Mr. Riddle, but Albus knows that anyone like Tom has to be beat down as hard as possible. How enraged Dumbledore must have been when his darling golden boy James died and that awful Snape survived. Anyway, I can see Albus manipulating events, though perhaps not with Unforgivables. Then again, Minerva thought it was awfully nice that Harry Crucio'd Amycus Carrow; you have to wonder where she learned that attitude. |
Pepperonyfan1982 chapter 6 . 8/26/2013 this story is awesome! |
Nanettez chapter 5 . 8/14/2013 It would be nice if Lily had a girl and James had a son. |
This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 6 . 8/13/2013 Good story |
mizzrazz72 chapter 6 . 8/13/2013 Vernon was a fool but hopefully he will leave Petunia alone. |