Hahaha the ending lol xD
Anyways it's amazing!
:D

I like your fanfic. Splinter sometimes really act with leo and mikey with favoritism... but i know he loves his sons... leo is more dedicated and mikey is the baby son... it's cute. And your a/n say you and your sister talked about favoritism...my big brothers when were little also thought i Was the favorite child... but my parents explained i am the little sister... awesome job... DUDE!

Awwww that was so cute! 3

te tengo una duda por que cuando splinter les decía que si sentian rechazos y todas esas cosas por que no mencionaste a raphael?

Haha! So cuteee! You are a very talented writer! Please write more :)
I do have one question though...
Is this fanfic based on the 2003 TMNT series?
Anyway, keep it up! I love your stories :)

I love the turtle tots. They are so cute!

I always tease with my bro that I'm my mom's favorite. of course she doesn't have any but's just me being funny. I like how you turned humor into a little angst

Ha. My parents say "I have to like one of you to have a favorite"

Awwww, very cute!
I hope you write more TMNT stories

1. *there, not their
2. *you're not your
3. cool story bro.

Aww, everyone's master splinter's favourite!

Short and sweet:]
I've read a couple of fics on the origins of the nickname 'fearless' but I think yours is the first to look at 'splinter junior', and I liked your take on it! You did a good job characterizing the brothers and Splinter and I like how the conflict was resolved. Poor Leo, so young and already angsting about his nicknames at the end 3

-G

This is the first TMNT fanfiction I've ever read, I must say, you did a really good job.

Haha, I remember you having this fight! :) and last night when I fought with Leo Jr. ;)
Keep up the good stories, couz!