Ok, so I read that story right after the Andy-uses-Sharon-to-win-a-bet story and I'm kind of mad that so many people use Sharon. But your writing is pretty good as always.

Wow great details... very descriptive and visual, nice. Let me know if you're open to any suggestions with this pairing, I like you style of writing and would love to read your work in the future.

This is very well written. Thank you for sharing.

you wrote an amazing story!
i love how you've put these two in not-that-typical-circumstances but they are both seem to be absolutely in character! that's really great. i believe, you've captured the very essense of Emma's character (a lost child craving for warmth) . and that line about Sharon's hurt pride - it's just wow so Sharon, really. and the fact that she stayed even not really caring for Emma - also - very Sharon.
moreover i wanna say thanks for an awesome sex scene. i happen to read tonns of femslash fanfiction lately and all sex scenes were so similar with one another. while yours was one of the best.
i don't ship Sharon/Emma but you make it soud so fraking awesome :)

I'll be frank: I don't like the pairing and I only stated reading it because it had occurred to me that it had never been done. However the fic is really great and not at all what I was r expecting. Good job and I'm glad I read it.