' ...you reminded me what it was to feel again. I had forgotten...'
that's make me cry, a lot of cry.

a great story. jim lost pike and get khan as dad. and now jim lost khan too.

This is fantastic, definitely one of my favorites. You wrote everyone perfectly, your writing was great. The part with Spock and Bones being protective was funny and awesome. The ending was very sad, I really felt for Jim. I agree, Benedict has one of the best voices in ever and Chris has very pretty blue eyes. Thank you for this.

Beautiful story!

I really liked this, I like Khan being nice. And poor Jim, he doesn't know what to feel. You got their characters down pat, I love the part where Spock and Bones gave him twin glares of over my dead body. You're right, Chris has got the prettiest eyes and Benedict has got the most awesome voice. Really well done.

Heart-warming, but heart-breaking story you got here! I wanted Daddy Khan and baby boy-Kirk to stay together forevaaaaaa *sob*

Great :)

This was such a beautiful story. I was weeping through most of it. You are such a talented writer. Thanks for this.

Wow, that just really brought tears to my eyes. Made me wish for a happier ending, too .

Wow, if only Jim could get his sentence minimalized so he was like on some kind of ship arrest/ community service thing where he stays with the Enterprise and helps them. That'd be cute, because then Jim'd get a dad again. :D

Nice job!

you suck, every time i read this story i always end up crying and sniffling everywhere. i must be a glutton for punishment, but there really *is* something about kirk's eyes and khan's voice. hope you write more :)

Great story!

Ha. Ahahaha fuck you and your ability to make me cry with words. I need a hug. Fuck.

I'm crying on my end...

Thank you, for the tears that are now rolling down my face.

Thank you, for such a beautiful story.

This was a believable scenario and the characters were well written. It had a realistic pace. I loved it.