| Reviews for Fractured Reality (Reworked) |
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   Yagami Kuzuki chapter 2 . 4/20 This story is amazing, already liking it keep up the awsome job can wait for the next chapter |
| bananahead1 chapter 1 . 3/27 ill read again just what happened |
| bananahead1 chapter 1 . 3/27 what happened to the old one |
| starbrigate chapter 5 . 11/19/2016 I haven't read anything past this chapter and I'm leaving a review for me to state my theory~! Flame is the old master~! So far my clues are, He doesn't remember anything before the one year of his 'stay' and he have this old power~! That's all for now~! |
| oLordyo chapter 31 . 7/1/2016 clap clap good job :D |
| Nightfrightpony chapter 29 . 3/2/2016 Please continue this is awesome story please continue I love this story please |
| Wildt chapter 29 . 11/26/2015 I was once again correct in my predictions. Suck on that K. |
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/12/2015 I cried ;-; nuff said. It's a good story |
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/12/2015 Proofread this! |
| Moka Cocoa chapter 27 . 9/8/2015 Oh shooooot! |
| Moka Cocoa chapter 25 . 5/24/2015 Man, i cant wait for the next chapter! Great job! Loren reminds me of Carnicise from The Shadows of The Past |
| Moka Cocoa chapter 24 . 5/14/2015 I wish i chose a diffrent username... Well, onto your well diserved review! So... since the last chapter was focused on Ness and Ninten, Im glad Lucas and Flame had this one, even though it was very short for Flame. And... uhm... what else... Oh, um, im glad Lady heart didnt die! Seeing Lucas start to panic was a... (not sure how to word it) good feature, Guessing from the characters used so far, i would think there will be 2 or 3 more layers, since these characters havent been seen: Flint Mimmie Minnie (Whoever Nintens dad is) (Possibly Ness' dad) Nana? Thats her name, right? Alec Boney, King, and Nintens dog ROPE SNAKE! Also, is Princess Mary Queen Mary? Why im asking this, i have no idea, i dont know if people are able to comment on this stuff. |
| Moka Cocoa chapter 23 . 5/13/2015 Its me, that random Jenna person! I dont know if you read these, but i desided to make an account to that i could do more stuff! |
| Jenna chapter 23 . 5/13/2015 Okay, I think your still updating this stuff, which i love, so im gonna try to make a review, just for you! Sorry if its not that good, as in the way i word it. So... um... I think you hit everything off correctly, and... uhhmm... at first i wasnt happy with the focus only being on Ness and Ninten, and i was intrested in what Flame and Lucas were doing. When i got the end of the chapter, i understood why their was no focus on Hina- i mean, Lady Heart, and Lucas, but i was still wondering about Void and Flame. So ya, first actual review, ill do it again if it keeps you writing! P.S.- you and LordLenne are my fav authors! |
| Jenna chapter 21 . 5/13/2015 *cant stop squealing over how cute this is* |
