This is so sad

This was really... interesting. By all means it was absolutely brilliant, I mean no insult I assure you. But the whole idea and the way that you presented it is so unique that I cant even begin to express what I feel on this. Its fantastic and the characters act so much like how the authors wrote them to be. Except for the fact that Thalia would simply laugh if Loki slapped her. I know that that part was meant to show that she was messing with him, but I think that it would have been better if Loki had just tensed up and said something really snarky and cold, and had left her stunned by his words rather than striking her since that would have probably led to an all out war between them. I hope that you realize how brilliant of a writer you are :)

Interesting! XD I loved it!

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T-T poor loki, great story!

I loved this! The part where Loki takes her from Arty reminds me of my fic where Thoth takes Thals from her and blackmails too. I loved this sooooo much! AMAZINGJOB!

Are you going to keep writing? Please. This is really good! Please keep writing!

I like this so much better than the other one. (I really wish I could put an emoji here, just so you know.)

Also today I was working a summer camp and so I was coloring with my little third graders and one of the crayons was called cerulean and I totally thought of this okay

This fic deserves a lot more love from others. I thought it was really well written, I loved the Loki and Thalia interactions.