Story prompts on tumblr will give you a bunch of good ideas if you're ever stuck.

Um, I don't know what I want to see in here but I really like this story too.

pl continue, it is an interesting story

Please Update. It's really good

Love your story

Candy: Loads and Loads of fluffiness!
Shandy: Maybe put in the pasts of Marik, Yami, and Bakura. You know, why their vampires, what their family life was like, maybe even more than that. You can also add in how Isis, Ryou's father, and Solomon made it there and are somehow still alive (or are they vampires?)
Candy: and Yugi, Malik, and Ryou aren't exactly in love with their vampire mates yet, so throw in a few scenes of that, too.
Shandy: Your always about the love.
Candy: Your no better!
Shandy: True, true.

I love the story glad to see that it hasn't been scrapped. I think you should slow everything down, take some time on each character and their reactions to seeing their family again. Oh and did joeys sister survive or not it would be cool if she did. Like if you had seto save her, oh you know what how about have mokuba save her that would be cool. I think the lights need time alone with their family's to get some answers about what happened and how they met yami and has friends.

Excuse me...um is this still up for adoption? Cause I like it a lot. I want to drag it out and explain everything without giving it away. Its also the perfect idea. And I want to use it. Wardiors against vampires. The lights good people into killers cause they think it is right. Im an action junky. Lol. Please consider me.

interesring

interesting start

interesting can't wait for more

I like this I like this alot

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Hahahahahahahahahaha, I love it.

OMG!