Ah~ I realized there's a sequel! How foolish of me XD I'm super excited for the read :D

I loved it! 3

oh what a super mega cute chapter, that was a great way to end it, I love that tino is having a little babe, makes me wonder if berward would be able to read the babes mind while it was still in him, but any way. super story kind of sad now I wont have anything to look forward to.

You know your other story has rule violating content. The admins don't take kindly to rule violators (deleting either their works or account without warning. Maybe even going as far as IP Banning if they continue to violate their rules.). You might want to go back and fix your story violations before someone reports them.

Also, either it was chapter 38 or 39 has a formatting issue going on. Many parts were singled space.

As a reminder, in case you have sex planned for later on or it is already present in the story: Fiction MA is not allowed on this site. Check the Rules and Guidelines page: Above the Rating Box in red. (www dot fanfiction dot net / guidelines /)

If you have sex planned, it is best to tone it, and any story that features explicit material, down to fit the Fiction M rating. Fiction M can have sex implied or a brief non-descriptive moment between the characters. You cannot describe penetration, foreplay, oral, or masturbation as that falls under Fiction MA.

If you find the rules here unfavorable, or just wish to host the explicit stuff where it won't be reported, there are other sites to place your stories on such as Wordpress, Livejournal, Dreamwidth, DeviantArt, etc.

Please remember to respect the site's rules. They are there for a reason after all. Your story isn't the only thing at risk of removal if you decide to break their rules. Your account could be suspended or deleted too. Doesn't always happen, but it does occur from time to time depending on what the admins decide. Better safe than sorry later.

Of course, this only applies if you had sex planned or it's already in there. Same goes for the first story which I will be checking into now before I continue on with this one.

oh things are really starting to go places the truth will come out soon, I was kind of confused when lovi was back home when I though he was locked up before, I though maybe I missed a chapter, but that makes lots of sense, cant wait for the next one.

oh so much stuff is happening, I don't even know where to start any more, I just know am all in knots now about everything,

It's great that you're back! This chapter was emotionally wrenching and gripping, brought me right back into the action. I'm really sorry about your relationship, I hope things have gotten/will get better.
All of us are behind you, don't worry. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

so yay super chapter, sorry it took me so long to review, but still loving all of this

oh yay, another really cool chapter, so yep very worried about everything, but enjoy it all so very much.

Gerita cuteness. I wanted to learn about Lovi though. I'm worried.

oh, oh, I loved this chapter, such a cute little scene with luddy and feli

Love!

oh this is so going places, I really am looking forward to seeing how everything turns out. please do update soon.

I'm happy you're still updating this. I can't wait for more keep it up!