| Reviews for Lost Halves |
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  nntnthe chapter 15 . 1/14/2019 thank you ;) |
 Cartlin chapter 14 . 11/4/2016 Eh, this chapter isn't very believable. Odin is KING of Asgard, and all the Nine Realms. As such, it was he right to do as he wanted to the twins, whether it was morally right or not, debatable, but Frigga would have no power, just as she couldn't rule in Odin's stead when he was in Odin sleep since they had sons of age. Not to mention, Frigga is a war bride and of Vanir, and as such, would have no real power in Asgard. The boys could possibly challenge Odin's right to the thrown, or have a council do so, if they have one. There's also the possibility of Jotunheim bringing charges against Odin for the stealing of their royal heirs. ALL these things would take time though, as it should be, and this shouldn't be something that's resolved immediately. Not to mention, centuries of imprisonment doesn't even make sense when you consider the crime. Sure, he banished one of his sons, he didn't kill him. Thor restarted a war between Asgard an Jotunheim, yet he was just banished. The punishment just doesn't fit the crime. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/27/2015 This is one of the best stories I have ever read! I loved how the feelings between Tony and Phil grew, and how accepting everyone was to find out that he was a god. Nice twist with having him be Loki's twin, that was a good touch :D |
| TheOncomingStorm11 chapter 15 . 3/30/2015 I love this story! I would love it if you did a sequel to this story. That would be absolutely amazing! |
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 15 . 11/3/2013 the ending seemed a bit rushed but loved this |
| kogouma chapter 15 . 10/27/2013 this was great! and what a sweet ending, i loved it! though i have to ask, what happened to Pepper? She just kind of disappeared...XD |
| JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 15 . 9/1/2013 This was awesome. |
| Angst-BuriTTo chapter 15 . 8/31/2013 Awww! Yay! Happy ending with proposal! So cute! Lovely story I would recommend to anyone. But i am sad it's over! |
| Angst-BuriTTo chapter 14 . 8/31/2013 Yay! Byebye Odin! Frigga could be a little more emotianle tho.. But amazing! |
| You Know Who I Am chapter 15 . 8/31/2013 Anyways, have read it. True to your words, ch. 14 is KINDA weird. But nothing that ch. 15 can't fix. OMG, Phil, TONY! Ammfff make a sequel! |
| sbrock777 chapter 15 . 8/31/2013 I loved that story thank you |
| sbrock777 chapter 14 . 8/31/2013 I like it thank you |
| sbrock777 chapter 13 . 8/30/2013 oh boy oh boy I cant wait to see what the do to odin PLEASE PLEASE post soon |
| sbrock777 chapter 12 . 8/30/2013 oh we need more tony/phil stories I like this one though please post soon |
| undeadTyrant chapter 13 . 8/30/2013 This is a replay on how I reacted when I saw you updated "yyyyyiiiiisssshhhh yiiisssshhhhh next chappiiieee yyiiiisssshhhhh!" Holy crap Odin! :D you're goin down! |
