Nice one!

A great story until the slash at the end. Well written.

Color me surprised that is 100% positive you accomplished that! I did not see that one coming.

A great read and an very though provoking one at the same time. What would "I" do with "20 seconds to live." and I truly could not come up with a good plan that would fit if I were with someone, let alone alone. That would
a.) Give my attacker/s more grief or kill them.
b.) Allow someone else to escape to get help.
c.) Let the person/s I care/love for know I care/love for them.
d.) Of course all the above lol.

At the end of this review I just also wanted to say thank you for a great read, and well keep up the great work.

Ooooookayyyyy, that was unexpected. And kinda gross. Not to mention wholly inappropriate. Kinda ruined the whole story. Really sorry I was reading this on mobile and couldn't see your avatar picture; I would have known to avoid it then.

I love this story.

never imagine harry and severus i guess i always wanted severus love for lily stand true. so last part not for me
but apart from that whole story was outstanding
loved all of their reactions specially last three. draco neville and harry awesome threesome
please do write more
bye sumi

Brilliant story. Kind of like the 'Escape the Room' scenarios available to participate in.

Love it

I kind of expected they'd be partnered together, even the kiss. It was still fun to read though, and the second kiss was a surprise since it happened before explanations were made. XD

The Patil twins made me cry though. I thought Neville would, but the girls for it in the bag.

Loved this one shot. Cool idea about the test where you twenty seconds to live. Very fun.

Very cool story, and the ending was perfect.

great story!

Love it:-)

Go Harry ... Nicely done my dear...

Kudos

Nice