Buckle up because I am going to give it to you straight. Work on your writing. It makes little sense and is terribly juvenile. Also, you may want to restudy basic grammar as you clearly lack a proper understanding of English based upon the caliber of your writing. Reading this chapter (as compared to the others) was especially painful. You have nice ideas for a Lone Ranger fan fiction (such as the creation of the character Lee) but lack the skill to write it. If you don't study and re-evaluate your work, you will never improve.
Best of Luck.

Please update, I love this story.

Hmm, I guess this way is better too :)

Totally gonna read this! Also did not see a lot of credibility about Rebecca's character; I mean, come on, she just learned her husband was dead then she comes kissing his brother? I'll rather Dan and Rebecca truly in love - they had Danny for Christ's sake! And John to be with someone else ;)

I really like you story i can't wait to read more so pleaseeee! continue as soon as you can. (if there is a mistake of grammar in this review im terrible sorry but im from spain and im studying). Congratulations.:)

Just read chapter 4 and have to say I can't wait for more, love your fanfic! Please keep posting, ill be waiting to see this update. :)

This is really good! If you're still looking for a beta I would love go help :) I hope you update soon.

Hmmm... I'm curious to see how the tracking goes especially if they have Lee with them. This is a nice kind of AU story, not all over the place and stuff. Lets face it, nobody really likes Rebecca that much anywayXD

Great Chapter.

I didn't really like Rebecca either. Great beginning.

I love it I love it i love it! I'm afraid I can't beta for you but, I will review more chapters if you put them up. *smiles hopefully* this is actually a really nice first chapter and please post more!