I just gota say, holy S**t

oh. my. god. this has, so far, been the only book to make me cry, TWICE this is, truthfully, the greatest dook ive ever read

i think this is a "The Human Species" situation. Rish killed himself or died somehow, and thats why haunter keeps coming after him. Rish is dead, and "eric" now imhabits his body.

Spooky Scary Skeletons ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡).

Huh, this was the chapter where you reached 10k views? May I ask, what's the number now, since this story has been out for a while now? Anyways, now my thoughts on the story.

At last, after many painful chapters of tediousness, hatred, and agony. The two have finally reunited. Wait, we need to throw them a party. QUICK! CALL AQUAMAN!

Grovyle is easily one of my main characters now. I like how every time he's angry, you put it as "Grovyle is NOT in the mood to deal with those idiots." It's just so fucking funny to me, and he reminds of another Grovyle I found really funny in another awesome story.

Well, he's not my favorite, oh no. It's human Eric. Human Eric. Oh my god. He was messing around while eating a dead rattata for fuck sakes. As human Eric said, "he's gotta keep his cool" XD.

And Black the EVIL Umbreon, umm... needs serious mental help. Like, he's the definition of a selfish, arrogant brick. Probably the worst fucking thing life decided to birth... (Okay, maybe not the worst, I take that back).

The writing is so good man. Well, good, but damn, why can't you look more closely for those spelling errors man, cmon. Seriously, you spelled "Between" like this "Ebtween". Like, are you really sleepy when you publish your chapters? XD. Or is "Ebtween" actually a word in some other country? lol.

Anyways, asides from me being the man-child I am. Like most times, I really enjoyed this chapter. There's just something to it that separates it from most the chapters so far.

Also, autocorrect. Stop telling me "Ebtween" is wrong because it's not. Eric told me that it's a word. It's a FACT. (okay, I'll stop.)

Happy Easter (if it's Easter in your timeline that is). Hope ya good day m8!

Huh, I wonder how much this can go downhill now. Eric is hated by his once loved one, his girlfriend. Treasure Town is 90% fucked (My childhood D:), and Team Uncario are allianced with Clades. One tough battle this will be for Eric and his mates, that's for sure.

Welp, Blake, and Cladus have joined forces. Eric and Elly are screwed ;). Nah, of course not, but still XD. (Cus the prince and princess always get lucky :D).

Also, I don't know if I had pointed this out before but Elly screams like every time she speaks. Like, calm down woman you might lose your voice if you do it three years time. (And plus she really doesn't want to scream her head off when she has a child wink wink ;)).

Also, the fight with Blake was pretty cool too.

Okay, I can barely remember anything else since I last read this from 2 weeks and I can't be fucked to reread it so I'll have to stop this review.

Ahh, everything is finally coming together. This explains why Dusknoir was trying to kill human Eric and Grovyle at the start, and this chapter explains the entire plot overall. Now, poor Eric has been captured, so I wonder what he will do. And it seems that Eric and Elly have finally been reignited once again (well, most likely in a cell, but hey, love is love :D).

Also, I forgot to make the joke that Lucy stole Zad from Chimecho from my last review XD.

Okay, so after finishing "The Assassin and The Princess". I decided to finish off your fanfiction once and for all now. Over the past week or two of doing so, I have to say, these past few chapters have kept me entertained, especially with this one. Now, I will tell you the scenes I liked, and some of the stuff I disliked.

Things/Scenes I liked: I enjoyed seeing a new character that just got introduced "Lucy". I like her soft personality, along with her loving Zad (we know it's going to happen, don't lie to me or I'll ship Eric with a Charmelon, and say the Elly isn't real). Also, some other characters I liked was the Sandslash who is known as the "Son of the Desert". I really liked his back story, along with his personality. He may be one of my favorites now. And can we not forget the typo king "Simon". Like for fuck sakes, he makes more typos than me when I use my phone. That's obviously what you were going for of course, and it really does pay off, for as he is one of my favorites, just underneath the Sandslash.

I really loved the scene where Eric knocks Zad out. A really dramatic scene, showing how far Eric's mind has gone, same goes for when Eric tried to commit suicide.

Now, while I could on for a bit with the positives, I want to mention one bad thing I have to mention, and that's Eric rude behavior towards his friends. He cares so much about his crush Elly, so much so, that he just turns into an unlikeable prick. Now, the first time wasn't so bad, but god, when he found the white bow that had a blood stain on it, HE WENT ON TO DO IT AGAIN!

He just continued to be such a fuckwit, with him always blaming things on himself (understanding, but when he goes so out of Length about it, it kind of just pisses me off), physically punching his best friend (putting him through hell as well I might add), only focusing on his girlfriend when their friends lives are at state, and many more. He is still really likable overall, but the times when he was being a dick went on and on, never ending, leaving me to almost quit the fanfic, due to how long it took to get past it all.

But, as soon as he entered the desert. The story I knew finally came back and back strong as well. I'm gonna read like half of the next chapter before (maybe all if I have time) and go to bed. Cheers.

I think Eric went super saiyan 3 there

This chapter was really awesome to read, but, my god, the length was fucking ridiculous, I had to constantly take breaks to read the entire chapter.

Now, with it, all read, where can I even begin?

Well, I might start with telling you my favorite part about this chapter, and that was the part where Elly shows Eric what happened to Voltaire. That scene is easily one of the best scenes I have ever seen for an in the fanfic, if not one of the best moments I have read in any fanfiction I have seen. And with Eric also getting to witness their two friends that helped them throughout the start of the story. It did kind of get me emotion... I'll miss you Mick and Milly :(.

Also, every time you tell me to Zannys theme, I just play Ganon's from Ocarina of time XD.

I also played the nighttime Ambience theme from Ocarina of time as well, right after the Frozen Voltaire scene, hehe.

And, holy fuck, are the Pokepals in it for this time, not one but two dangerous criminals have escaped from prison? I hope Eric and Elly are in the mood of fighting because they will be in a world of hurt otherwise.

Since it's 3 am, I, unfortunately, cannot see the next chapter, but I probably will tomorrow, I'm very eager to see where this goes.

Alright, with it being holidays, I can find some time to read this fic. Sorry that it's been awhile, but anyways, onto the review.

First off, there are some strange spelling choices, like not capitalizing the pokemon's names, only to capitalize them from time to time? It's very strange, not mention, there are just some spelling mistakes as well. Like, sometimes, some of the words would not contain the first letter in them and just stuff like that.

The plot of this chapter is great and really did not let me down in the slightest. I felt that it was very satisfying to see the Megagross FINALLY get his come ups for being such a pain in the ass and him potentially being one of the Team Uncario? That's an awesome plot twist. Also, mentioning the people who died in this chapter by Team Uncario was a little sad, for as I really liked all three of them. Speaking of the deaths, one of the deaths was Virkov. Something I didn't see coming, however, was that Lucario was the son of him. That's so sad :(.

AND SURPRISE, SURPRISE. Elly has a crush on Eric, cus no one totally didn't see that coming XD. In fact, I thought both of them already confessed their love lmao.

This was a great chapter, can't wait to read more :3 *disappears for 100 years*.

PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU WILL HAVE THAT LIFE GEM PUT THE F*** BACK INTO THAT ESPEON AND THAT SHE WILL BE REVIVED AND THE FOREST WILL BE REVIVED AND THE EEVEELUTIONS WILL BE REVIVED AND THE 25 EEVEE PUPS WILL BE REVIVED AND EVERYONE WILL BE TOGETHER AND HAPPY AGAIN OR I SWEAR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TORTURE YOU WITH THE FURY OF 10,000 FEATHERS UNTIL YOU DO! Oh and BTW nice job on kicking Blake's a** Elly. He really did deserve that and you were awesome and bada** as f***. Anyways... YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED, ERIC566!

You should have opened the BIOS Hardware Diagnostics Tool first, to see if there was anything wrong with the Hardware. Next, you should have updated your Browser as well as all of your Programs/Drivers to the latest version, and then checked to see if there were any errors and/or anomalies/corruptions inside of System32 as well as the Windows Registry. Also, you should have kept a close eye on the computer's resources by opening up Task Manager (by using the keyboard shortcut ctrlshiftesc) and going to the Performance tab. Run a few scans with Windows Defender, then used Windows Defender Offline. If all else failed, you should have taken it to a professional. It would have saved you from having to wipe your Hard Drive. Take this as advice for the next time your computer starts to act like a light bulb powered by a potato.

I can already tell that the story is just going to get even darker from now on… Holy crap.