Reviews for I'll Show You Mine
EmeraldPhoenix1022 chapter 1 . 10/6/2019
I so loved this !
Nanyin chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS! *that looks soo wrong*
skyeryder01 chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Loved this!
Pharies chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
Other than wondering what happened to the candle after he flipped them over, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I was actually in the middle of reading this when you responded to my last review and didnt have time to finish it because I found it right before bed haha

This was a lot of fun )

~Tori
Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Wowzer!
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
But of course they'll have to keep practicing-an experiment is no good unless you can replicate it...

Again and again and again...
Gemini Sister chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
A very hot and steamy companion piece that had me fanning my face as well as squirming with pleasure. Like Snape and Hermione I am well satisfied.

Thanks for writing and sharing. xx
Janette
AdelaideArcher chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
*fans herself*
Whew. Right. That was hot! I loved it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Oh good grief, this was an amazing story until it fell for that trite old boring abusive sex troll. If he gets to hit her ass, when does she get to hit his? Hot wax torture? You need to read better books. When he flipped her over, did the lighted candle land on the bed and set the covers aflame?
TashaRose chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Awesome story. This one, and the one that started it before this one. Bravo! Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
That was terribly fucked up
lisacakes16 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
well that was super hot!
Writtenaspr chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Roarwwwrrrr...
God. purrrrrr.
How you write.
Fanfiction is almost breaking Laws.
But Aphrodite is smiling at you, Pan and honest nature are as blissful as we readers are.
Ms. Anthrop chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Very, very, well done. Love the dynamics and the passion. The perfect PWP if there ever was one.
Annie chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
Very sexy! But...a lot of mistakes and they really take you out of the story. A beta would really help!
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