I would love it if you would return to this one i always liked seeing from the view of other characters

I like the summary of the story. For one thing, the readers get a dissemination insight of Grovyle's mind. Of course, books shows the thoughts of MC.

Conversely, there is lacking in organized structure. It's not like I can perceive actual thoughts in there. The flow is too compressed into tiny paragraphs. It sounds like a conversation or inner monologue in the head just like script writing.

In general, please, do not take my advice critically. Take it as a learning lesson and an experience to teach the author some more skills. There is determination, perseverance and thorough work! In a nutshell, I'd recommend this on fan fiction as wonderful story to be read on my profile page. )

Yeahhhhhhh! I'm pumped for upcoming fights!

Well this story was a pretty neat read. I haven't read a lot of EoS fics centered around Grovyle, but this was absolutely one of the better ones I've come across on this site. The way you set up the relationship between Grovyle and the human was fairly interesting, and I liked the part where Grovyle was actually contemplating letting the human die, given what he's been through. Other than a few typos, this story is definitely a worthwhile read.

I'll follow this and hopefully read the rest of the chapters later. b)'')b

I was curious about all the fanfics of Grovyle. I had the courage to complete another research, then read your story. Of all the other stories, yours was the best and the longest. It seemed to have a certain originality about the oc. There are three central reasons why I adore this story: the entire length, that original idea and the whole vocabulary. )

First of all, the entire length is long, very long. :0 It is the longest fanfic to read with 73, 517 words exactly. It is terrific and has the greatest number of words! It is amazing the effort and the determination. It shows that, as some kind of author, you are able to maintain great updates.

Throughout reading another entire stories on Google (Yes, I know that it's not the best tool to find fanfics, but it so huge.), second, it followed pretty much the IC of Grovyle as that thief. Nobody else followed the same ideas as that. It was exclusively the best idea. Additionally, you used kind of the entire idea of the future and the whole length. I actually adored the father-figure of Grovyle, though there were some flaws. I didn't understand why it was so important for him to take care of her. And Ri seems obviously to be ready for any leader. He desperately didn't evaluate her own age.

Third, the vocabulary or the wordage was perfectly done. It had the right words at the right time with the right tone. I don't know if you studied this through books or other resources. I loved the idea of how the vocabulary was very good to learn. It improve the entire vocabulary for the reader. Not too hard, yet it is simple enough to understand. Ten words I didn't understand per chapter. Lol. XD

In summary, these main points that I assessed convinced me to follow and favourite you as my favourite author. Nevertheless, there are a lot of points that had some negativity: quantity does not equal quantity, punctuation has to be revised or typos and some beta reader can help or read it to someone else before sending it online. Conversely, I am very happy for your success online. Please let there be more reviews. According to your schedule, update these chapters. Don't make the readers wait another year or so. :P

Oh that was the worst cliffhanger! I hope Grovyle will be alright! I mean, he will be but that doesn't mean I can't still be concerned over him!

Oh, dear

I like this. It's cool! Its interesting to see a story with the POV of a pokemon :)

It will be interesting to see things that took place in the events of the games through Grovyle's perspective.

I suppose this isn't the chapter to say it, but I'm predicting that past Ri will be Lira's partner.

How did Grovyle make a comparison involving dawn when he has never seen a sunrise or sunset?

Once I called a friend of mine fun-sized.

He punched me in the neck several times and didn't speak with me for a month.

Interesting. There's another fanfiction I'm keeping up on that also has a Lucario that goes by Ri, and used to have a friend named Lyra. It's quite the coincidence, assuming that the other was not inspired by this one.

Is this getting to the point of meeting Celebi?

I actually have not yet come across a PMD fanfiction in which humans other than the main character are still around. One would think that would be an idea used by many, seeing as it's an obvious and easy to come up with deviation from the games, but it seems to be rare. My guess is that people assume that it's cliché, so I'd like to commend you for using a plot quirk almost nobody else will.