... Oh my ghost. It's great! You have to continue please! I beg you from Mexico! Your story has been translated horrible but readable by google translator, so it's really worth it

MORE!

vortex! THAT LINE U SAID "electrifying " HE SAID IT IN THE SHOW LIKE THIS "...an ELECTRIFYING PERFORMANCE, that WAS a big dead away ;)

I'm waiting on Aggie to bust in holding a beaten and charred Plasmius and say 'The deed is done.'

The horror and awe!:-)

Amazing, amazing, AHHH~MAZING!
I loved everything. I really did. I didn't think it would be possible for a four way fan fiction, but you made it work. I loved how the first few chapters where everyone got excited for the convention. It made me excited. I loved how you captured the characters. Especially Howard. He's my favorite.
BUT!
One tiny, itty, bitty, thing. Your writing felt like it was summarizing the entire thing. Be careful with that. May I suggest details?
ANYWAYS. Applause to you author. Keep up the good work. XDD

It's been over a year! Fucking, UPDATE already!

Sorry if my previous review was offensive, I did not intend it to be that way and I did not notice that it could be taken that way until now.

Paranormicon sounds awesome! Holy crap yes I would attend if it was real!

I'm pretty sure Norman is 11, unless you changed his age and I missed it.

"36 hours of pine trees and highway." Well I can tell you're not from Oregon XD Or at least you have the vaguest concept of its geography, especially if Danny would be coming in from the east, presuming he lives somewhere in the Midwest.

UPDATE SOON! THIS IS SO GOOD!

If you're still in need of suggestions, I definitely recommend with the inevitable, action-packed climax battle and such that Danny and Randy combine their attack powers for a super-charged attack,

and more hilariousness from Howard and Mabel!

Also PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY! IT'S TOO AWESOME TO BE DISCONTINUED!

Nevermind ignore my last comment anyway were is Jasmine (Danny's sister) in this story did she move out or something?

The ghost he is going to collect is probably vortex

I love this! Please update I've been waiting forever and you're torturing me with the suspense!

Vortex?

HURRY I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER PLZ I WILL DIE IF I NEVER FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!

PLZUPDATE! I KNOW YOU SAID "on hold for a bit" BUT THIS IS LONGER THAN A BIT!