How the hell a baseball bat is able to break his collarbone?
A bat is a very imprecise weapon, and turtle's shoulders a protected by the big shell.
I can't imagine an angle where the swinging bat would hit a body, and not be stopped by the shell/plastron.

I loved that! Oh my goodness! I don’t know what it was but something in that last chapter just snatched at my heart.

Read How The Mighty Have Fallen. Loved it. Love you for it. Thank you.

Leo is fricking amazing! Always there for his bros and never giving up!

Excellent!

Awesome story! Loved it how you had the young boy bringing back is sword. Very nice! The end had me smiling!

The only thing I have to, uhhh... I don't want you to get offended, but I've noticed in a few of your chapters that have "woe" in it. Example: "Woe there buddy" -Raph, this chapter. Woe means great sorrow... for example, "Woe is me! This story hath endth!" When I think you're meaning to put "whoa." which means to slow down or command to stand still. for example: "Whoa, horsey!"

Anyhow, nit picking (uh, that sounds gross- lol- I promise I do not have bugs!). Awesome story! You've quickly become my top favorite TMNT writers! :)

Not only did you update, you completed it! I think it was a nice climactic scene, a nice final battle. I like how you tied in the boy again, and how you ended it. Enveloped in the warmth of his family! The banter between Leo and Raph was priceless! Nice story!

Aww that was a great ending a great story too. It was worth the wait. Bye

Ah, so the boy did help him by returning his sword. That was nice of him. I'm glad Leo got home and that he's going to be okay now. Nicely done on this ending. I loved it.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Another awesome chapter. Yeah, Leo told that boy off. I think it would have been cool if the boy had helped him escape, but at least he won't tell anyone he saw Leo. I hope Leo can get out of this mess soon. Nicely done on this. And I agree about unfinished stories. Usually, if I know I'm not going to finish a story or no ideas are coming to me, I'll take it down and concentrate on the stories I can finish. But you have to understand that a lot of authors do have other commitments in their lives that sometimes makes it impossible for them to finish their work. I know it can be disappointing but that's the way life works.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Another awesome chapter. Poor Leo though. He really has been in a slump now. I really hope his brothers can get to him in time and get him some help. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Whoa. An awesome start to this story. I loved the action in this one and how Leo's rescue mission turned into an ambush. Nicely done on this. I hope Leo can get out of this soon.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

That was awesome!

Excellent story. Great pacing, great detail, great atmosphere. So happy that you finally came back and finished it. You write Leo so well.
I look forward to reading more of your work!

Will you write a continuation of this story? It's was so interesting that I wanna read what happens with my dear Leo...please think about it...I beg you...