| Reviews for Mob Love Story |
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  chai tea chapter 1 . 10/17/2016 Amaaazing yay! This is bomb... |
| blue chapter 4 . 9/6/2015 I love you're story |
 RoobieBooh chapter 5 . 8/24/2015 It feels like you rushed their relationship a bit, but it's still a really good story. Other than missing a few commas and words here and there, you did a wonderful job. |
| RoobieBooh chapter 3 . 8/23/2015 Sasuke might be a bit OOC, but I am loving the personality you gave him. It's refreshing to know not everyone view him as the hard ass he really is, but loving your story so far. Good job! :) |
| Chrome Dream chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 I loved your story. It was really sweet and I have never read anything like it before. We need more stories like yours! |
| fluffy1hothanyoulover chapter 14 . 2/2/2015 brilliant |
| S. Hoshina chapter 13 . 1/31/2015 Love your story from the beginning to the end, especially all the SasuSaku moments and drama! Will be waiting and reading the sequel next! |
| Writerk1 chapter 13 . 5/4/2014 I love you story, it was full of love. Love it! Great Job on this wonderful story. |
| Riinachaan chapter 13 . 4/3/2014 Ohhhhmygoood. This story was absolutely amazing! It had the right amount of humor & romance! When Sasuke thought Sakura died I was near tears. I would give it a 9/10! You just need to add some commas here and there since some of the sentences are kind of hard to understand without it. But nothing major! The amazingnes of the story totally makes up for it! I hope you'll write more stories!(: |
| JJGre19kakashi chapter 13 . 3/15/2014 I love this story. Great ending XD |
| It's good but chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 You have a pretty good plot going on, but the story would be much better without the run-on sentences. Try shortening them up with a few periods and commas here and there. Plus, the dialogue could use some work, too. Just get on with the point of what the character is saying instead of dreading it out. It makes the reader want to stop reading because of that. But all in all, it's not a bad story. |
| IISasuXXSakuII chapter 13 . 3/13/2014 WOW There needs to be a sequel this story was amazing ! |
| White.Rose.Didi chapter 13 . 3/11/2014 Ah... I love happy endings... :D |
| White.Rose.Didi chapter 12 . 3/10/2014 Have you actually read what you uploaded? Obviously, not. Otherwise you would have edited this chapter. I couldn't ever read half of it before I got annoyed and stopped reading it. Why? Because I could understand absolutely NOTHING from it. Why? Because almost all of its sentences are missing a few words. Okay. A LOT of words. So I couldn't understand anything... And I am NOT going to read the next chapter, either, until you fix this one, so that I can understand what's going on. ThankYouVeryMuch! :D |
| K21EMERALD chapter 11 . 12/31/2013 They better not do anything to Sakura while she's pregnant. Great chapter ! Can't wait until you update next! |
