Reading the series again and its still awesome. I did notice a few errors like missing words or the wrong word used - the latter probably a hasty spellcheck thing. Its not too bad, but just a heads up.

Keep being awesome, V!

That was excellent. Janada is awesome, and Snake is interesting so far. Les and Vhetin would make a interesting pair in the future.
Also liked how you added in D'harhan. Keep it up.

Yeah, I got to say, Brianna overiouly doesn't see the bad side of Galaar, that bastard gonna show his true colors soon, mark my words, hope the jackass get his ass kicked again, I loved what Janda did to him.

Anyway, I am very surprise this story hasn't gotten enough attention, you done a really job on the series here, I love how you done characters and their personalities, Cin is interesting Mandalorian in my opinion, his almost reminds me of mix between Torian Cadera and Boba Fett. Anyway nice work, I see Izzy there still causing trouble.

If you want, I got one idea for a character if you wish? up to you dude. Anyway good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

Fantastic story, vod, as always :) Excited to see what you cook up with the next one!

Ahhh, the only problem I have with the new format is that it means more suspense xD Still, extremely well-written chapter, as always vod. I was definitely not expecting that approach :D

Ahhh, how do I always fall for the cliffhangers?! Nice work, vod! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as always xD

very thrilling

Ahh, I am so curious to see how this is going to play out. Nice job with the cliffhanger, too xD

Very nice, vod! I am on the edge of my seat (As usual xD) Can't wait to see where this is going!

I got a little shiver when I read the last line. Wondered when they'd show up.

Can't wait to read more!

Great chapter, vod! Really looking forward to where this story is going, I honestly have no idea what to expect...

I love these stories and you're doing an amazing job :) Keep up the awesome work! Oya!

Wow, vod, as always I'm now on the edge of my sea. I honestly have no idea what's coming o.o Awesome writing!

Very nice, ner vod! Been looking forward to this, and I have to say that I wasn't disappointed :D

Also, as an odd little chuckle, I saw this on twitter just after finishing reading:

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Not to worry. The deaths will get progressively more violent as the story goes on :)"

It's looking to be another interesting one, vod! I can't wait to read more!