| Reviews for Dirty Secret |
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moonlightclock chapter 16 . 7/23/2017 It's been years since the last update please update a new chapter soon It is a really brilliant story to not continue it |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/20/2017 Please need new chapter |
Guest chapter 16 . 10/1/2015 FINISH IT ALREADY YIU LEFT US AT A CLIFF HANGER! |
Guest chapter 16 . 9/7/2015 FINISH IT |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 FINISH IT |
Slurps chapter 13 . 8/18/2015 When will you finish it I'm on chapter 16 and you ended it at a cliff hanger that's so evil |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2015 I LOVE IT I just really wish you would finish it |
Eurisse chapter 3 . 3/29/2015 Is this a crack-fic-ish or something? Coz the development's def giving me that vibe. I know that this story aint serious at all but well the plot looked like it would be... well as much as it looked to me but nvm. Also, I would like to comment bout' few things. First I guess it's quite unbelievable that while being in a truck of mess someone can still find the time to bat their eyelashes. Well, that's just... kind of... odd (as much as odd means to me). I mean, C'mon, the girl's got serious problems. She doesn't have to be reduced to a pathetic-melodramatic-cryinglady but being flirty after all that has happened just seem weird. Characters were quite OOC as well but I still find the story nice. I hope the next chap will be better :) |
Eurisse chapter 2 . 3/29/2015 Wow, how do I describe it? Aren't best friends supposed to stick together until... until who knows when? I know it sounds cliche but then again, it is what people expect to happen. I was not disappointed with what has happened so far, I know that you have your reasons but man, does Sasuke have to be such a B? haha Anyway, this chapter is well-written and I can see that you're attempting (actually already succeeded) in trying to broaden Ino's social world, not that she isn't a social butterfly to begin with but really, I know you're trying to make Ino and Gaara's world connect and it's a brilliant thing to put them in the same group. I guess I just have a few issues regarding that, but I trust your intuition well. What the, I think I'm rambling too much. All I really want to say is that I enjoyed this chapter! P.S Why'd you make Matsuri a slight whorish here? I think it doesn't suit the lil' girl's character, but it's your story. Also, I think that some of the characters have been "kind of" slipping out of their characters but well, we'll see how it goes :) Till the next chapter! Ahoooy :D |
Eurisse chapter 1 . 3/29/2015 I felt really bad for Ino... no joke. It was a terrible scandal and I don't think anyone can simply live up to that by shrugging their shoulders off Haha. I do hope that she'll get out of that mess though, Ino dear just doesn't deserve the crap she's getting :x Also, I commend you for a well-written story. The first chapter came as rush though but I believe that you had your reasons for it. I am glad that I came across this story. The plot looks promising and I'm looking forward to read more of this story's chapters :) Thank you! |
Alixprint chapter 16 . 2/17/2015 Please update soon. I love this story! |
Tenma Sosei chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 So, NarutoxMatsuri don't get love so why give a shit about GaaraIno? |
darkangel2352 chapter 16 . 2/2/2015 soo glad you've updated, i love this story! :) I really cant wait to see how this will go in the next chapter! keep up the good work!** |
Yerik chapter 16 . 2/1/2015 Oh my! I need to see whats coming right now! Sorry I didn't come before, the only ting good about coming late is that I can read two chapters! Hope to read the next soon |
Yerik chapter 14 . 12/10/2014 Hi there, you probably don't remember me and who would? I've been so.. well that doesn't matter, finally i've got free time and I remembered this fic, I came and red all you have write since the last time I came. I red about your problems, I hope everything's better now.. I love this fic and never know what to wait for haha, hope I can reed more soon! |