Reviews for Better Angels
Janesoul chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
Oh yes, one of the first stories I read for the ME universe, at the time it was going at around the 20th ... 25th chapter I think, I still hate reading unfinished stories lol blame it on the awful feeling of not knowing what happens or how a story ends when it caught you attention. Can't believe it's been 6 years already... Wow.

I was feeling nostalgic and started playing ME a few days ago, and it brought me so many memories, then came the need to fuel my imagination with some good old fanfiction for this couple, damn I still love them to this day! I'm glad you shared this with the world, and I checked your other story too (the one with Dr Chakwas), it was really good too. Hopefully one day you'll come back to finish it, who knows if I feel nostalgic 6 Year from now I'll find the final chapter posted :)

Anyway, just wanted to let you know people like me still remember and come back to your stories, this one was certainly beautiful and gave me more than the crappy ending we got back in the day of ME3. I hope life is treating you well dear author, Im sending my love from another galaxy :3
adalan chapter 54 . 7/31/2019
A recent replay of Mass Effect prompted me to reread this fic. I’ve had a lovely time. I appreciate so much about your writingthe humor, the British spellings (so exotic but yet so like coming home), your command of words which gives you the power to bend them to your will. What I love the most is your ability to capture the tenderness and intimacy of this relationship. I’m not talking about sex here; I know people are prone to confuse the two. Real intimacy is ineffable, but somehow you still manage to catch in your descriptions of everyday moments of caring and compassion. The world needs more caring now. Thank you for spending your time and energy writing this and reminding us of how caring may move a person, a world and maybe even a galaxy.
adalan chapter 53 . 7/31/2019
My God, I love Aethyta.
adalan chapter 39 . 7/30/2019
I love the description of bonding and how it provides a framework for your whole story.
adalan chapter 36 . 7/30/2019
Conrad Verner! Bhahaha!
adalan chapter 35 . 7/30/2019
I’ve always wanted to go to Scotland and Ireland. I love the way you describe the landscape. It is in these descriptions of gentle, intimate moments between the pair that your writing truly shines.
Quintyss chapter 54 . 4/19/2019
This story was a perfect answer to the Mass Effect trilogy ending. Somehow you managed to paint a picture I felt compatible with my own Shep and Liara. Only my Rayne had black hair and cerulean eyes :D. Thank you so much for sharing them with us so poignantly.
Quintyss chapter 7 . 4/18/2019
Lol, you put my knickers in a twist on purpose with Shep being marine, then you did this. Keep up the great work and twists!
Quintyss chapter 5 . 4/18/2019
Sigh. Shepard is Alliance Navy, not marine. Commander is an 05 ranking in the navy. A marine 05 equivalent would be a LT Colonel. What Bioware made Alenko in ME3 would be an 04 marine officer... a Major. Shepard's next rank as an 06 would be Captain, which is what Anderson was. Navy personnel are typically 'topside' operations, however, special forces such as Navy Seals, or N7 in Shepard's case, would be a 'groundside' exception. But not a marine.

Be that it may, good story so far. I am enjoying it!
Guest chapter 37 . 1/12/2019
Such an amazing piece of work, it's art in the form of writing. Mass effect is such an amazing and my favourite franchise, and your story is fantastic, you have created and detailed universe within a universe. I can tell blood, sweat (possibly tears?) we're put into this story, and it has inspired me to be a better writer myself. I hope you are able to continue with your great writing, and wish you the best for your future. Thank you for providing the opportunity to read this. God bless xx
shadow chapter 54 . 8/5/2017
I liked the Epilogue!
General Cammy chapter 54 . 7/8/2017
so much better than the rubbish cannon endings in ME3. All that's missing is little blue children.
General Cammy chapter 46 . 7/8/2017
eww, cod. Honestly have no idea how English people can eat it. Haddock tastes much better.
General Cammy chapter 35 . 7/7/2017
yay, Scotland gets a mention. Plus Scotland's a popular wedding destination, anpther reason Liara and Shep should definitely go there.
General Cammy chapter 24 . 7/7/2017
poor liara, i even teared up by the end
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