| Reviews for Lab Hog |
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OWLKEEPER101 chapter 1 . 1/3/2017 ...as alluring as the story is, WTF SNIVELY! He is basically RAPING shadow! Ohh, just he wait till shadow gets loose... He's gonna feed that baldheaded freak his own teeth... |
ImKoala chapter 1 . 9/14/2016 Lol that was weird, but I don't know if I necessarily regret it. Lol what the actual hell Snively? Anyways good job setting it up but it seems like there is supposed to more to it than just one chapter, so if there are any more please post or whatever it is that it's called. Lol thanks. |
Kris Ichijouchi chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 This is going nicely, and although I know you have skill, I want you to read SonadowStories, or look up the word hermaphrodite. |
Jonas bat chapter 1 . 1/30/2015 Bra why'd you stop I was expecting another chapter? O_o plz make more |
jenny fox chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 Plz make more |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 omg luv it |
kazarthelion chapter 1 . 8/27/2014 hurry up with this XD I LOVE IT XD |
thewifisux chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 Hay My wifi here sucks like crap just wanted toh sey yew shud update dis sometime .3. I kno you have the next chapter kthnksbai -Sawnika |
Shadow-of-death060 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013 OMG I'm loving this fic but still por Shads all bounded n all I hope to read more soon ite aewsome... |
Assorted Souls chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 O_o I like yaoi but... ; |
Lynn chapter 1 . 8/4/2013 Ugh, that review I did sounds writing! Vivid descriptions! Yes I agree that is very is more scarier than being trapped in a mad doctors lab as I said and you captured that. |
Lynn chapter 1 . 8/4/2013 Boy,when I thought it was bad as it gets for 's creepy the last sentence of you ain't seen nothin the Hedgehogs universe has some creepy mad doctors that would do this. Well written! Nothing is more scary than Doctor Robotnik and Snively is just as bad. |
Happy Camper chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 Wonderful job on this! You have a talent for describing settings; I felt like I was actually there. And this Grammar Nazi is very happy with your spelling and punctuation(stories are so much better when you can actually read what's happening,haha). Interesting plot idea as well; I can't wait to see what happens next(yes, I am a sick-minded person, but *cough*sexyhelplesstorturedshadowissexy*cough*). I haven't heard of Snively before, though. Is he from the comics or something like that? Anyway, this is an AMAZING story so far and I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter. |
VocaSonic chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 Hallo. .-. ...I nao you and Percy are writing this, but liek srsly would you have been without meh? InotherwordsIkindawantatleastamentionofcredithereo mgIfeelsodemandingD: BUT YOU KNOW. Yeah. Yeah. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 Cool, can't wait for the next chapter! |