Dang, you really know how to offer a seemingly happy story then JERK IT OUT OF THE AUDIENCE'S HANDS! Thanks for this great story!

Breaking my heart! I hope you finish this one day!

wheres the rest!

...doesn't Rukia have a salary, too?

Oh Zyephen. I knew there was going to be beef between Byakuya anad Renji! You did great again, my friend. You're awesome!

Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it and they were both so in character! :3 Great job! You managed to keep Rukia in character and that's an achievement few IchiRuki or RenRuki writers have :) This was very sweet :3

You came back with another story! Im so happy! This one isnt as heart wrenching or angsty as Things Never Spoken, but i will still continue to read as your loyal fan. Now, to be honest, i feel that too much happened in just the first chapter, but worry not, because the hardest part to writing anything is the beginning. Your language is still over the top, but Renji's dialect annoys me for some odd reason. This fic is going to be something a lot more different than I expected from you, but you are talented and noteworthy nonetheless. I loved how you portrayed the angst of wanting someone so badly to the point of madness, loved the one sided RenRuki before it developed into a whole, but looks like this ones going to be different. Keep up the great work, and i cant wait for the next chapter.

This seems too good to be true... and when considering your works in writing and art, I figure it is. Still, I'm going to be patiently waiting for my heart to be broken.:P This is a promising start and while I'm dreading Rukia telling Byakuya the news I'm also looking forward to it. Anyway, hope there's more soon and know that I'm really glad you're back with more writing.:D