Reviews for Separate and Together
Black Lagoon chapter 7 . 2/22/2018
Really enjoying this story as well and can't wait for the next chapter !
Brooklyn Nichole Lind chapter 7 . 12/3/2014
Can't wait to see where This goes
RemovalAcctKE chapter 7 . 12/1/2014
Wait, I don't quite understand. Was Ginny the woman at the bar? I liked it so far, but that part just got a bit confusing for me .
marinka chapter 7 . 12/1/2014
Why did cheated on her? No doubt she will find out, unless it was her in the bar and all his promises and hopes will be dashed. Didn't he learn the first time around?
chromeknickers chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
You know who your Ginny reminds me of? The younger Ginny, pre-HBP before she got all slaggy. The backstory Draco gave was just wonderful and so sweet. It could be a story of its own. Ginny asking him why he cheated on her was very real and very uncomfortable, which made it so real. The only thing I'm not sold on is Draco's reason why. Although I suppose such things never have the satisfying answer that we want. Sometimes we just do stupid things because we're stupid and unwilling to think of the consequences.

But this was a lovely chapter and I look forward to the next update. :D
Nutmeg44 chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
I panicked for a second thinking that this story was over. I love that she loves him but I wish Draco would do more to win Ginny back.
Marinka chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
Great, just great chapter! You have shown us why they have separated and the history of them as a couple, and managed to do it perfect way.
What I wonder about though is what has changed for him? Why did things change? Is he feeling that he deserves to have family?
hatebelow chapter 6 . 11/1/2013
This is the sweetest chapter of them all. I love younger ginny. She is exactly like I think she'd be in cannon if jk would have developed her better. I love her strength of character and her dewy yet fiesty mature. I loved this chapter. I'm so happy that she and draco are working it out but I didn't feel like he properly explained he and Astoria. Hopefully, it'll resolve itself it later chapters. Great job again.
brianaangel chapter 5 . 9/27/2013
Woohoo! Thanks for the update!
brianaangel chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
Yay!
brianaangel chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Love your story so far...Ty for this.
chromeknickers chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
What a rollercoaster ride of emotions this chapter was. In the beginning I was grinning ear to ear - Draco mocking his father, Lucius being a delicious grandfather (that doesn't sound right) and Orion being too cute beyond words. And now THIS! Gah! Ginny! Part of me wants to throttle her but at the same time I entirely understand why she's doing what she's doing. *sighs* But I simply can't see anyone else supporting this. Her mum will explode!

Now, my favourite bits of this chapter:

1. Draco mocking Lucius and Lucius being so suave and yet fatherly about it. *sighs*
2. Orion is now the most adorable child in DG fandom.
3. This:

("I don't want to be in Hufflepuff. Uncle Ron said only really thick people get put there!"

"And they think my family is perpetuating the stereotypes," he mumbled under his breath.)

Haha! I could so hear Ron saying that and totally disregarding how brave Ernie Macmillan was during Year Seven. But of course he wasn't there.

4. This:

("Well that's good. I'd like to keep my options open."

Draco couldn't help but chuckle at his choice of words. "Keep your options open?" Draco asked with a raised eyebrow.

"I heard Grandfather say it yesterday," Orion explained. "I want to sound more professional.")

*lol* Seriously, these Malfoy men are pure entertainment, as well as heart-breakers. *sighs*

Can't wait for the next chapter when we get to see Draco win Ginny over. Great chapter, again! :3
Nutmeg44 chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
She shags him in the bathroom then divorces him?! Ginny is killing Draco (and me) here. Grrrr!
marinka chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
You are evil! How can she be so cold and distant to him, after spending time together and giving him hope? It just seems to be so sudden:(
Please don’t kill us and make her re-consider, she has to also think about Orion. This will destroy him for sure.
hatebelow chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
This fic gets better with every chapter. The beginning of this chapter with draco and his nervousness is so real. I distinctly recall having the exact same conversation with myself before my first day at a new job. I love that you are able to out everyday feeling and emotions down on paper.

They are both wearing their rings! Yes!
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