Heartbreaking! The helplessness that Molly feels...takes me back...its a sick feeling. You've captured this very well...and it gels with S3 also!

Augh. This is so right on target, it saddens me. Before I saw S3, I was sure Sherlock was playing Molly yet again. The whole 'you've always counted and I've always trusted you' was one more big fat play on her feelings to get her to do what he needs her to do. I think he came back in S3 with a bit more conscience, but only time will tell if he keeps himself open to feelings and caring or if he shuts down his heart all over again.

Oh the feels! THE FEELS! Well done.

Brilliant. Very canon, very raw. Absolutely brilliant.

Such a sad tale, but so true to the show, I think. Poor Molly- always giving and with so little to show in return. It will be intersting to watch their reunion play out on TV. Thanks for the post!

ahh! the sadness :(

Oh, so much angst.
HUGS
Love, Cynthia

Heartbreaking. You capture what I expect it is like to be Molly so in love with someone who doesn't return the affection. Simple and lovely.

Fantastic. No other words for it. You captured every detail of their scenes perfectly. Hope there's more.

This is the saddest . . .Ever.

Beautifully written.

very well written.

That, I loved. Simple. If you have ideas for continuing it, I highly suggest you get writing. There are so many ways to play off of this... And I hope you use one of them. Either way, I really loved it.