Why no more chapters? The story is great.

This story is absolutely amazing, I love it. Please update it

Oh my gosh, I laughed so hard when I read this. Indur is just brilliant in his nonchalance about Sauron falling off the wall yet another time.
I hope you haven't given up on this story. I've reviewed a couple of chapters about two years ago and I'm pleased to see that you have developed the story further with tales from the first months of Urzahil's stint in Mordor. I'd love to read more about the early years of Third Age Barad-Dûr and how Urzahil's career progressed. I also love the way in which you portray their characters, not evil for evil's sake but with all their quirks and funny habits - which isn't surprising, as I'm also a big fan of your other stories 'The Iron Crown Tavern' and 'The Bridge over Osgiliath'. I sincerely hope that the plot bunnies hop across your desk or any other useful muses visit you with some inspiration for this story. And finally, thanks for writing!

I read the whole of the story in one day! It's very well written, and a fun, original take on a character who doesn't get much attention. I especially enjoyed your Sauron. Approachable, but properly indimidating in a unique way. Thank you for sharing your work. I hope the muse hasn't left you just yet and that we'll get to hear the rest of Urzahil's story!

In which everything possible goes wrong like a set of dominoes.

This is awesome. Is there any chance that you will continue to write this? coz I'd really love to see what happens to Urzahil to rank up to number three in rank. I wonder what the majority of the Nazguls thought when he was promoted above them lol.

Short but good. As always.

I so love this writer who opens up this world to us. The sensual scene was done so well. Excellent Storytelling-Give Us MORE.

Haven't read very far yet, but I have to say I really like this story. Very original idea )

Is it me or do you keep reposting this chapter?

this story!

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! please update this fantastic story

Urzahils early life very familiar to me...for very personal reasons. It is a beautiful story and one with a very intriguing start.

Great storyline. I never thought I would sympathize with the mouth of Sauron. That bar fight scenario the history teacher uses seamed familiar. That and the fort sumpter thing makes me think you went to wando. Did you take Mr Giddick's class?

You're an amazing writer! I love the story! Can't wait for more!