well snap

My god. When I first saw the summary I thought it's gonna end up fluffy or funny despite the tags. I was sadden, so angsty. Anyway, it was still good!

please write more of it!

This is very interesting... I will wait for more. :) I can't wait!

Oh man, this is amazing! Are you going to continue writing in this verse? I would totally be up for that!

Just the desperation of Tony, and the pain of nobody being able to see or hear him, and especially Loki not being able to, man, that was hard to read.

I especially loved the line about how Tony hated that Loki couldn't see or hear him, because if anyone should be able to, it's Loki, because Loki is magic and fire and wit, as Tony thinks. Loki's more in tune with things that are supposed to be impossible. But he can't see Tony, or even sense him, and it's heartbreaking.

And what also really amazes me about this piece is how quickly you're able to establish that there was a serious and important relationship between Loki and Tony without needing to actually show it. That's amazing, and I felt my heart breaking too for Loki, and the way Tony would see him grieving in private, running his hands over the arc reactor, etc... Man, my heart, lol.

But of course, it's the ending which is most fascinating, when Tony's rage and desperation actually manifest and shatter the phone and the lights, like a freakin' evil presence from some horror film. Man, that was scary, and to see Loki, who's usually the one who would cause that sort of energy surge to happen through magic, so taken off guard and surprised by it, man, that was some visual.

Incredibly done, and if you do write more of this scenario, I'd totally be into it. As always Fel, thank you for sharing!

So this is frostiron?

Update soon!

Desperate!Creepy!Obsessed!Tony is extremely compelling. And awesome. And I love that first bit, after he died, and how the humor descended into the angst like that and just COME ON LOKI! HEEEEEAR HIM D:

Aww! Poor Loki!

What's up with Loki? How did he die... and before Coulson?! And what's up with Pepper?

Sad, but I like.

great little story. very well written.