Very cute! I actually thought that this would be a sad ending, but it was a happy ending! You even showed how devoted they were to each other!

1000/10

Oh yeah, and it was creative how you made "Ib" a nickname and not her real name.
And in the words of the Almight Pickle Lord:
VIVA LA REVOLUTION A LA REJECTS!
:D

Gah! I loved it sooo much! So sweet! I loved the mistakes, Mistake specifically, Mary's subplot, the Mary in the real world, Garry's proposal, everything! This was such a great read! The last bit of the chapter "Home" was a bit rushed, but that's pretty much as I have to say as far as criticism goes. Great fic!

Weiss Guertena, A.K.A. the most awesome Deux ex Machina EVER.

YEAH! REVOLUTION A LA REJECTS!

THIS IS AWESOME! *virtual hug*

liked the dialogue in this chapter. and the ending.

You just-

Garry just-

...

I am not speaking to you anymore.

Just kidding. AWESOME chapter. I like how you put that quote from the game in the middle. Update soon!

Hm... So Demon!Ib and Demon!Garry was just Mary's hallucinations? Oh, well. This story deserves more reviews, I love it. Most stories are 'Ib is sixteen, Garry is -insert age-. After the troublesome ordeal of the gallery, they are best friends or something. Will love find it's way?' And so on. There are so few stories that include the gallery and it's horror, so I'm happy, good job!

- Vana

very cool set of chapters. keep it up.

Moar! :D

another great chapter.

Is Mary talking to Guertena!? THATS AWESOME!

You're amazing and I love you. This is great... Absolutely great.

interesting chapter, though the dialogue was a bit wooden.