It is now canon that Tony is smart enough to build a time machine

I hoped for natasha/ Perci

Good job :) The scene is actually tremendous... :) this entire story is just fantastic.

is there a sequel

I thought this was a great story. I loved the characterisation of Loki here. Perci and Tony were so sweet! Thanks for sharing.

Thalia and nico aren't siblings

fix the endgame.. is that for Tony?

Percy should simply not hold her she should point out everything she sees wrong with Asgard and how they are opening themselves up to a war with the Greek/Roman pantheon along with the Heavenly Realm. Pointing out that her stepfather is the Arch-Angel Gabriel and that Her Biological Father is Poseidon/Neptune. And that The Government Agency is known as SHIELD is in big trouble as well. For taking her away from her family. And at the same time point out, I refuse to learn anything from a world that is so behind the times and backward especially on how they treat their women. No wonder you fare doomed to be destroyed because of your warrior culture and how you treat your own people along with others. In fact, she could day based on what My Stepfather told me YHWH/ Yahweh/YaHoWaH Plans to come in with his legions of Angels to administer Punishment on Asgard but that's not all he is Also Planning on Punishing the other Pantheons as well such as the one My Birth Father belongs to. In fact, the Mortals are also due for punishment as well. In fact, all of Creation is in Big Trouble. So no I have absolutely no intention of doing what you people want plus I know about how you people Treated my Mother along with my Half-Brothers and Half-Sister no wonder you screw up are doomed for destruction you Are literally walking your selves into a self-Fulfilling Prophecy because of how you treat others. IDIOTS! So what Percy needs to do is look up Ragnarok and Asgard's history that is leading up to it. Mistreat People and they will eventually go after you for that treatment for which will be your undoing Asgard gained control of the other world threw war. And Warrior Cultures always fall in the end.

Take a look at ancient History and their cultures and way of life and in the end, they always fell. Something to think about.

You telling me thats Percy Jackson?thats more like an o.c if ever I saw one .first chapter and I really enjoy the story ,I hate swearing but it’s still pretty good. Please more ! I NEED MORE!

I’m in love with all the doctor who references

This was pretty good. Some grammatical errors and sometimes the wrong word was used though. You also need to work on properly implementing words like, there theirs and they're among other things. While they sound the same they have different meanings. Another example is breath vs breathe. While they essentially mean the same thing they are used differently in a sentence. "I couldn't catch my breath" vs "It was hard to breathe" You also didn't explain well how Gabriel is also her mom because even if Gabriel became a body double for Sally Jackson since he's pretending to be Loki, it wouldn't matter because the original Sally, which is Loki Odinson (real Loki), was the one to carry Perci for 9 months so the fact Perci has archangel blood in her makes no sense. I also wish you implemented Gabriel a bit more. He's super funny and it made me curious; did you have him dimention hop for his 'witness protection' or is the supernatural world the same world as PJO and Marvel? It's also quite (different word from quit and quiet;they look similar but are pronounced differently and have different meanings) disturbing how you had Tony and her in a sexual relationship when she was just 15 because it comes off as pedophilia since he's 24. That's 9 years apart, almost a decade (10years) older and she's still a child regardless of the fact she thought she was gonna die, that's gross. It's different if she were 18 on the verge of 19 or just simply older. Overall the story was good though. I laughed and cried at all the right times. One question though, could Gabriel have healed her from the damage to her uterus and ovaries? He is an archangel after all. Please don't be offended, this is constructive criticism and I liked where you took this. Fury is a butthole sometimes. If there is a sequel to this, i look forward to reading it.

aww good story! honestly was hoping for a sad ending because I wanted to cry. you wrote this so well, kudos!

I'M CRYINGGGGGGG
SOBBINGGGGGGGG
I'M A MESSSSSSSSS
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
I DON'T EVEN KNOW
WHY I'M CRYINGGG

Is there a sequel for this?! I really like this story so MUCH

Okay so: This. Is. Golden. I've been on a search for good Percy Jackson Crossover fanfictions for weeks now. I finally stumbled across this one and was like "Okay this seems like it could be good" and that-that was an understatement. It's very well written and easy to keep up with. At the same time it's not too easy to keep up with. Any moments I was confused by something a later spot would clarify things. The final battle to save Olympus was written at a bit of a fast pace but I feel that should be expected because that's how it is during a fight for not just your life but for others' lives as well. I'm gonna save this and someday soon I'll reread it. Thank you for writing this masterpiece.