Another awesome start to an amazing story! ! What happened that was so terrible that John is like that? Ptsd ?was he tortured while missing? Pleeease write more! ! How will Sherlock bring him back?

Yes, soon!

I like this story a lot. It's shaping up to be a good one and I hope you update it soon. It's ironic and a little tragic that Sherlock's teaching John about mind palaces is backfiring on him. How's John going to figure out he's safe and how's Sherlock going to reach him? Please update and share! :)

The the the footsteps thing. Stop it.
It's so sad! I thought John had gotten mad and left or something! What happened? Who hurt him? And where do they live!?

Glad to hear it! Well, read it, but you know what I mean.

I'm inclined to believe you meant "season three," not four. Oh well, hurrah for finding missing scraps of paper

Ack. O_O What on earth.

I've been scrambling, searching my mind, trying to figure out what's wrong with John, but can't think of anything. O_O But I think it's probably a Bit Not Good. O_O

Ack. O_O Update soon as you can, please! O_O

hannah!

Now this is a fascinating concept. Very well done, thank you!

This is stunning. So beautiful.
So during his captivity he just mentally checked out, and that's why he's not responding? Though that doesn't seem like John... Maybe they wanted information and he was protecting it?
THE RADIO IS BEEPING SOS. Is that coming from his subconscious or is it the outside world trying to signal him?

Do keep going please! I want to know what happened to poor sweet John. He's mankind Sherlock worried and sad.

Hope to read more!

This is soooooo good and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Oh, dear, I wonder what happened to make him like this? Excellent chapter, thank you.

OHHH... I'm hooked already!

They each have their area of expertise, and thinking is Sherlock's.

Is it a fugue state? Blue screen of death? Let's see, so many options...