Use. The. OC. Tag. It is not that hard!

A bit of a problem I have with chapter 2 is that the fight scene just ends when your character comes in and kills the risen that attacks Virion. Secondly, where the heck was Robin during all the commotion? He isn't mentioned at all during the fight and everyone pretty much gets overshadowed by Magnus. I don't mean to sound overly negative but, you did make the fight seem slapped together, rushed, and overall uninteresting. I know you're following the events of the game but that can get boring rather quickly, unless of course you plan on doing some other stuff with your character and the story (which I hope you do). I know this is just the second chapter but I just had to get that out there.

I'm tempted to follow this, if only to see whether it's worth reading or not. Don't get me wrong, the quality is good, I'm just not 100% certain if I'll follow this all the way to the END or not. You get where I'm coming from? By the way, that was rhetorical, don't answer that. Anyhow, I'm looking forward to more.

...OKeey this sounds familiar for a reason, i wonder why? XD

Very nice keep going with it

Well since this is rather good so far, I decided I should actually remember to drop a review (definitely get the selective writer's block btw). Be very careful of Gary Stuing here. Your character is already apparently good with a sword, and if it's not explained, likely some people will get angry when they read the story (I assume Naga magically granted him the ability considering the bulk up and everything else, but people might still get titchy about that if nothing balances out the magical power up). Other than that, well written, a decently original plot to start off a SI from what I can see, so I'm hoping you keep going with this.

Hmm, I think your other reviewers mentioned the same caveats I would. Aside from that, I thought the protagonist took to being killed surprisingly well, didn't even seem shocked or anything. Makes him seem kinda unbelievable XD Still, well written overall.

Ok, so far, not bad. The thing with these Self-Insert stories is that no matter how many there are, they all seem to be done differantly. The "someone dies and is brought into the world" one has been done before, but under differant circumstances.

Though, if I may ask, if Grima could take Robin to Validar instantly (the reason why Magnus came in the first place) then why didn't he in the canon?

Nice work, Angel Face.

Not a bad start, but you might want to add a touch more tension in the fights considering that you ARE fighting to change fate here, and you pretty much slashed two Barbarians in two without much effort.
As someone who has just entered this world, (even though you are treating yourself in this story as someone who is already well familiar with the game) you should probably portray yourself more realistically.
By that I mean that if anyone were thrown into a situation that you were just thrown into, no matter how talented a fighter they may be, they would have been scared a fair amount that a bunch of maniacs with axes were charging at them.
Anyway, didn't mean to sound too negative but, those are my thoughts and all things considered, I am curious as to where you will/will not take this series if you decide to continue it.

Man, another Self-Insert. Not that I mind, I actually tend to like Self-Inserts.
That isn't the point though, the setup is more unique in that you don't wake up in a field, and that you are actually told why you are here from the beginning.
Looking forward to the next chapter!