Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This is so captivating! Would love an update xx

It's awesome! Please update! I hate story's with no end!
(Sorry for the grammar. I'm French)

It’s actually kinda stupid how mace brushed off obi wand concern and he didn’t mention this to anakin whatsoever.

well so far i am bored with this story ... 4 chapters and nothing intresting happened ... yeah not impressed so far ...

Yeah! I'm leaving review number 666! :D

Ah! So Dooku had the transmitter. Well, they'll have to find it, won't they?

This story was extremely flawed, but there were parts that I really, really liked! I also love how much of the EU ties into this. I'm a new SW fan ready to learn anything and everything, so you had some awesome stuff!
I'm thoroughly impressed with how long this story is. You kept it up for a long time. That's cool!

Anakin and Padme's reunion in the hangar was really sweet. :3
Oh man! The mediation scene was so good! I love how they sat back to back, what Anakin saw, how he chose to not give in, and then him waking sitting on the mat by himself.
Obi-Wan quirked his lips. "Of course I was. About what?" Love it! :D
Ah! Hugs! :3
Ooh! Attempts at Force-healing!

Oh, Rex! :( My heart sank.
Aaaaaan Ani has added to his kill count. r.i.p. Poggle. Or not.
SOOOOOOOO many parallels to RoTS and I LOVE it! Every single parallel!
And omg, I teared up for the second time reading him snap, then collapse, apologize, say he's /broken/. It was so emotional! And then Obi-Wan took him in his arms! (I would've moved away from the lava, but...) SO good!
Kriff! The clones are back!

Response to the A/N: I am learning so much and getting ready to read so many more SW books thanks to you. :)

XD Bail's reaction to her being married is priceless!

Ooh... is sending Anakin on a mission really the best? And it's on Mustafar. :(

I like Anakin doubting if he'll be a good parent or not. After that dream...

Whoo! Anakin feeling the dark side, Palpatine's force-signature, was a good moment. And so was him wandering over to the table without realizing! Loved how he checked his pockets when they snapped him out of it.
And then the moment that is now in my top 3 favourite moments of this story: Anakin reading that paper.
I felt DIZZY reading that. It was absolutely incredible. Because I know about Palpatine influencing the midi-chlorians to create Anakin. And just... the whole thing was perfectly written. I can barely describe how much I love this part.
And OMG OMG OMG! That dream! AAAAAAAAAGH! It's so amazing! My stomach was churning with nerves! The whole thing was incredible, but omg when Palpatine kissed his forehead that was so creepy but so terrifyingly good!
SO GOOD! Freaking loved this chapter!

I would have reacted differently to learning I was staying in the Temple. Instead of a relieved breath and a smile I would have been... confused and... I can't think of the word right now. But Windu just listed off his most serious sins and stated that for these he would remain. I would be thinking "Why?" and wondering if maybe they would keep me prisoner or something.
Also, unlike Yoda, who's dialogue feels very in character, Anakin's dialogue can sound a bit OOC. E.g. when he ends a sentence with "you know?" I doesn't sound like him to me.

I love how you write Yoda! Some fanfic authors mess up the way he talks, but you write his dialogue perfectly. And I really enjoy hearing from characters that we would otherwise only see in comics and the like. Love that extra depth.

Ooh! Padme knows it's twins!

Awesome arguments in this chapter. I certainly wouldn't know what to do.

Anakin remembering everything that happened to his mother, blurting to Council what happened, it actually brought a tear to my eye! It was really well written, and definitely one of my favourite parts in this story so far.

THANK YOU Padme, for preaching to them! They needed to hear everything you said.

I really liked the conversation between Yoda and Anakin. You are also really good at bringing up plenty of valid points in your writing, for better or for worse.

"Is there any good news?" "Always. Alive, we are." Love this.
I also love the line about how love doesn't equal acceptance of their wrong doings, but pressing someone to be their best self.
Oooh snap! They want to know what went down on Tatooine!
I really liked this chapter. I know a lot of people dislike the politics and council meetings in the prequels, but for some reason I really, really like them! And I think you write this stuff fairly decently.

Aw. I really like the part where everyone gathers around Master Yoda at the end.