| Reviews for To return (expanded and reviewed) |
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   Sajobst chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 Please expand! ️️️️ |
| lady sakura cosmos chapter 1 . 2/28/2018 good story |
| Anaih323 chapter 1 . 10/3/2017 Though there are quite a few spelling and grammar mishaps littered throughout the tale, it remains one of my favorites. It would be nice to hear if the brief stay in the labyrinth helped curb some of the irritating habits of the little girl, if for no other reason than to give Toby a break. Also, I got to thinking... If the whole labyrinth had changed to meet her new level of skill... I don't think it should have been possible for Didymus and Ludo to remain the same. Perhaps remain the same personality, and memories of their friendship, but perhaps they should have gotten an upgrade in appearance. Instead of a small fox terrier riding a sheepdog, he could be a knighted lycan type, werewolf or such, riding a warg type steed. Ludo wouldn't need to change over much to become terrifying, possibly not at all. Regardless, I still enjoy this story greatly. Thank you for sharing! :3 |
| KnocturneWitch chapter 1 . 2/4/2017 Love it! Thank you! |
| Talia-Naeva chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 profferred not preferred arm. I doubt she liked a different arm then the one offered to her. |
| devilmaycryforever chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 loved it, but wanted more! thanks! |
| Arioneway chapter 1 . 4/24/2016 Bravo! Encore please! Can you continue this? It is rather fun. And I want to know if she het to visit Toby or not etc. Cheers! |
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 4/1/2016 Ah, so amazing! Good job! |
| Scarlett Foxie chapter 1 . 12/22/2015 Cute! I like soldier!Sarah. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHH! I want more of this! So good! Thank you! _ |
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Very nice. I'm glad I found this one. {Smiles} |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2013 This was lovely and believable! I am very impressed and thrilled. |
| RoseDreamer87 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Loved it. thanks so this story. |
| Karasu Kagami chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD'VE ENDED! I think i may love you for this. To read what i have only wished for... I'm going to pretend this is canon from now on. Though admittedly i wish there was a sequel... And i feel bad for Toby. / |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 This was fantastic, I'd love to see a sequel or something, just for my own satisfaction. As it stands now, this is a lovely story, it's not bogged down with details so while the story is long, for being only one chapter, the story flows well into a cohesive whole. While there are no real stopping points, I never really wanted to pause anyway; if you ever want to make a story longer then this one be sure to add in a page break or a new chapter, just to give readers a chance to pause and then come back later. |
