Damn edward killing him. He separated his jaw
.holy canoli. I cringed.

What chu got in here? Your issues?

ROFL best line I've ever heard. EVER.

Im excited for this story. Good chapter.

This chapter made me swing my feet in the air i got so giddy! Gah! I love your writing so much.

Oh my i already licencia this story

I literally binged this story in the last 2-3 days. PLEASE FINISH. I mean, it's been a couple years since you've updated it but i've really enjoyed reading your story and would love to know how it plays out in your mind. LOVE LOVE LOVE it but i just wish there are more chapters :(

all bella does is fucking WHINE!
jesus, shut the fuck up and stop already...and stop bitching about work, get a fucking job you lazy bitch

I knew bella was gonna do that...take care of your fucking man before he leaves her ass, you dumb bitch

bellas really not very likable is she? all that bitch does is cry...Edwards gonna move the fuck on if she doesn't stop...who could love someone that hides their problems...lies all the time...cant say whats on their mind...and fucking crys constantly! and seriously? if your gonna puke, make to the god damn bathroom

ummm...come on bella...be smart for secc...ya he didn't do anything with Tanya...but he was going to. you have to know that bella! grow a fucking brain!

wow, bellas really stupid...why didn't she just tell Carlisle? he woulda fucking killed jake, I don't understand why girls don't tell!
I know all the excuses they give...feeling embarrassed, like they did something wrong etc etc...but you still tell.

I don't give one fuck about shit that's embarrassing, id tell...simple as that. Or id kill that motherfucker myself.

anyone else tired as fuck of bella being a fucking pussy who cant talk about shit that goes down? I have no respect for people like that...the bottlers...its just weird.
be real ya know?

and its chapter mother fucking 32 and we STILL don't know what the fuck is going on...and its waaaaay past the point of curiousity at this point and its damaging the way I see one of the main characters, its making me just not fucking like her, ya know?

its funny hearing Edward talk about loyalty. He doesn't know shit about being loyal...if he was truly loyal, he would have been loyal to his supposed best friend...and not fucked his sister. He wouldn't have considered hooking up with alice, he would have been loyal to himself and the girl he wanted and not went after anything that would fuck him at the club...no, this guy is far from loyal.

I'm pretty disgusted with your version of Edward...hes exactly the same guy from your other mob story...the same piece of shit.

he would have fucked ANYONE in that club...and that's just not fucking cool with me, have some fucking taste and some damn discretion.

he doesn't give one fuck about bella, and this is really hard to read.

wow can you make Edward anymore of a piece of shit?
jane, alice AND JESSICA? who the fuck is next?