| Reviews for Density |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/21 Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful |
anjiepotter chapter 1 . 5/28/2019 hilarious story |
roon0 chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 LOL Ron is really, really thick. Lovely one shot. |
noreenklose chapter 1 . 9/26/2016 Lovely. You should have hand delivered the wedding invite to moRon on April 1st, and put in the WRONG date and address. When he didn't arrive on time and complained about it- - - they could have shouted "APRIL FOOL!" Thanks for writing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016 Wow why the hate on ninjas. |
Nianika chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 This was so funny |
KnocturneWitch chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 ADORABLE, thanks for sharing. :) |
sparky40sw chapter 1 . 9/2/2014 lovely - pure class - and you did not even have to exaggerate on canon Ron thank you |
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Considering how much I hated Ron in the books and how dumb he seemed to be, I think this was a perfect fic for me to read. Plus, it had the nicest H/Hr fluff in it too :) it made me happy. |
dididoitwrong chapter 1 . 5/30/2014 Oh, I love it! It's a really nice story, keep writing like that! Thank you for that wonderful and funny story! |
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 5/5/2014 Cute oneshot. I didn't understand the title at first, but as I read it made a lot of sense. To start with the backstory of the hugs and kisses was a good idea as it brings forth he tendency for Hermione to be proactive about giving friendly kisses and hugs. It was interesting to see her take charge for someone else and do it. Giving that hug to Harry and holding right was adorable. Ron freaking out about it at first was really funny. It is understandable with Harry not feeling comfortable at first and then enjoying it as he did not have the greatest home life. When they started becoming a couple was interesting. You could tell that the two are really close since Harry was able to kiss Hermione on the cheek with ease. Then thy started to actually kiss and all was right in the world for them. Ron not letting Hermione finish really shows that he just charges in and if he stayed I wonder if he would understand that they are starting to date after that explanation. After the battle with Voldemort was shown when they talked about after the Horcrux hunt. Ron still doesn't understand that they are going out and it has been their fourth anniversary since they met eight years ago. Ron sees Hermione as a woman now, but she is already taken and his expression when she told him she had a date was priceless. Ron has somewhat of a good memory, but can't seem to understand that they are going out. You portrayed that quite well. Especially in the wedding scene where Hermione reaches her last nerve. The wards going against pirates and ninjas was hilarious. A very amusing and adorable story. Thank you. Keep up the good work. |
TLD110166 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 I like it! |
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 Very well written. |
Proud Harmonian chapter 1 . 9/23/2013 Good story. It was sweet the interaction between Harry and Hermione. I also liked how you portrayed Weasel as he really is having he emotional range of teaspoon. Keep up the good work. |
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 Cute. Yes Ron is that dense. |