PLZ CONTINUE!

Continue please!

Was that the prologue? Because it was really short.
First of all this is a great idea but the dialogue is unnatural and confusing. When you have a situation like that add in who speaks when you add in a third person.
Why would Mrs. Beckingham refer to herself As Mrs. Beckingham. I didn't get the impression that she knew that Cammie was there.
I would assume that she would use her first name (but we since we don't know that) she might say just her last name.
Keep in mind how critical I am, I'm not trying to be mean so don't take it the wrong way.
-Rrit
Can't wait for more. Intresting plot

Nice introductory chapter, so far, :) I really like your writing style, and I think that even though there aren't that many descriptions/tags during the beginning/middle of the chapter, it's also very nice for the dialogue factor. Maybe, could you please make the chapters a little longer; other than that, I don't really have any complaints. Just a few grammatical errors; [Then come in.] instead of [Then come in], and have a period at the end of each of the sentence; no comma necessary unless there's a tag or another description. Please update soon? Sorry if this sounds harsh; not meaning to.

x clara